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Lost Cause |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Note: this is mostly fiction, written when I was in a bad mood last night* Yeah I get angered easily I speak my mind too freely Some say that I'm just a lost cause A fierce feline with sharp claws Sometimes I can be a playful kitty Often feelin lost in this big city My blood boils from all the stress There's more to me beneath the flesh I can draw you in through my eyes Obtain you here with a kool-aid smile You see what you want to see I'm like splattered paint emotionally Dripping down a blank sheet Dropping down like tears to cheeks My crystal drops are always the same I'm a grey and blue painting of constant pain © Joanna [This message has been edited by RosePetal (12-19-2001 09:46 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Joanna, I'm so sorry you were feeling blue last night, we all have these times! (kiss on lips) We all love you so very much, sweet friend, and you are no gray and blue painting but one colorful loving friend to us all with so much love in your golden heart! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, my love! (kiss on lips) I will always love you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Well! Boy!! I am glad you were in a bad mood. Very impressive writing though. You had me really concerned. I bet you could really do justice to love when your in a good mood. Your new friend. Roger |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I can well relate, Joanna....Nicely penned.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well expressed Joanna! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What a way to vent...way to go girl! |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Joannna, I understand what is is to be in a bad mood. However, I hope that you feel fine. Sometimes life throws you some curveballs, but success will come your way, don't worry about it. Your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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