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Return of The Twenty or Less...#62

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-12-18 09:45 PM

"TWENTY OR LESS...#62"
Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON

entwined stillness

winter-eyes embrace
enduring snow-filled mourn
with gushing sense of
alluring beauty
defying

the end

"Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-12-18 10:28 PM

Another good one, Mark, but it sounds like you are here in this snowy cold, not that wonderful place in the sun..
Sandra

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-12-18 11:19 PM

You want me to write a short cold snow scene?

White snow
isn't always
cool.
Sometimes it's cold
and mean.
It gets old,
before it turns
green.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-12-19 01:03 AM

Snow.....cold but yet has its alluring beauty ...doesn't it?

This gave me the feeling of someone watching the white snow-covered land through the window of a cozy cottage...

Lovely...
Thank you
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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-12-19 10:07 PM

Sandra: is it that bad in your neck of the woods right now?

Kacy: Cute -- the 2nd half made me

My Melody: that sounds comfy.

-MVS

"Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace

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