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Free Verse Of You... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I thought of you today, And my senses overwhelmed me- …Held me… Bound at the edge, A teetering ledge- Of precious memory boxes… In my mind’s eye, Softened by gentle smile- I cry out for you… Hold me in sanctity, Pleasure my senses- Devour my need… Cradle me with silence, In a blissful free verse- Mine, of You… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love this... "Bound at the edge, A teetering ledge- Of precious memory boxes…" yep, love it!!  |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
In my mind's eye. More reality is seen through that one eye than the other two put together. I thought it was a great write. Very intense. Roger |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh now this I like. . . haunting yet delicate in its phrasing. . . and soft in its want. . . hi. . .  . . . nice to see you again. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
devina, I would ageree with Sven it is haunting and soft. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Devina, I didn't put my hat on yet, but if I did I would take it off to this and you. Sy |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful phrasing Devina ... very much enjoyed the flow of these lovely sentiments. Best wishes, /Kit |
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