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Open Poetry #17

A New Day

amerijuanican
Junior Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 12

0 posted 2001-12-19 04:43 PM

I great my best
this earth below
with a kiss from the sun
goodbye moon say no more

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-19 04:51 PM

(smiles) May we all wake up and smile to each brand new day together! (smiles) Soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

2 posted 2001-12-19 05:14 PM

I like this. Very good.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-12-19 05:48 PM

Good imagery. Typo? change great to greet?

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