. . . Thine eyes speak of love . . . Sonnet

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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-12-17 10:48 AM

Take this hand offered to thee, my own love.
Take this heart offered to thee, my desire.
Take my love offered to thee, hand in glove,
The perfect fit of which thou wilt ne’er tire.

Thine eyes speak to me of love to be shared.
Thy words fall on me softly as velvet.
Thy countenance shines, of all pretense bared,
Shown only to me since the first we met.

Our lips meet softly, love slowly sipping.
Thine eyes closed in love, lips parted for me,
Our bodies melting, warm heartbeat tripping,
Pounding, declaring a love meant to be.

Silently giving that eternal bliss,
Love’s true assurance in this lovely kiss.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-17 10:51 AM

*sigh* okay now this star is swooning with the pure romance that flows from this wonderful sonnet. I am putting this one in my library.....it is truly a precious treasure of the heart. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-12-17 10:53 AM

opps forgot to click the library button. You just really touched me with this poem, Interloper. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-12-17 10:57 AM

Sonnets seem to be in season.. This is very nice, I'm impressed!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-12-17 10:59 AM

You have touched my heart with these wonderful words.This is one to keep.
Peaches

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-12-17 11:00 AM

here he comes...Interloping around in my soul

Love this....so beautiful

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-12-17 11:30 AM

Lovely sonnet Interloper! Very romantically penned.
Enjoyed, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-12-17 11:56 AM

Startime ~
You honor me and (sigh) melt my heart

Colleen ~
What a wonderful compliment. Thank you

Peaches ~
This is your first visit to my work. Thank you for your time and wonderful comment

SEA ~
I 'lope 'round your soul anytime, gal

Nancy ~
Why, thank you Enchanted one

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

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with you

8 posted 2001-12-17 12:18 PM

*click* library

CocoBaci
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Posts 3043

9 posted 2001-12-17 12:36 PM

Thine eyes speak to me of love to be shared.
Thy words fall on me softly as velvet.
Thy countenance shines, of all pretense bared,
Shown only to me since the first we met.

Interloper my dearSweetPoetfriend this verse above truly moved me and my praise goes out2u4writing this precious lil sonnet4all of us here2read2day...

Reading such tenderness in poetry can only uplift a broken spirit2never let go of their dreams and their belief that true love does indeed exist...

HaPPy HoliDays2u
*~coco~*

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-12-17 01:08 PM

SEA ~
(blush)

Coco ~
Thank you for visiting dear one. I have missed you tremendously (that is, a LOT)

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2001-12-17 02:40 PM

Interloper - the eyes, the eyes do tell all, the gateway to the soul. Well written, and well said...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2001-12-17 02:56 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words of love always shine to us all! (smiles) I always love your enchanting words! May your heart forever beat with a true declaration of eternal love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2001-12-17 09:26 PM

Ah, this sounds like such a wonderful love. And a beautiful sonnet to go with.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2001-12-18 01:36 AM

These are the kind of kisses I like...James

Midnitesun

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Gaia

15 posted 2001-12-18 02:32 AM

This is so romantic. I am getting inspired to try and write a sonnet. Well done, as always.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2001-12-18 11:24 AM

Bill ~
Thank you very much.

Noah ~
Always good to hear from you

Sandra ~
Thanks for the visit luv

James ~
Welcome to the club my friend

Midnitesun ~
Right on! Do it ... I look forward to it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

17 posted 2001-12-19 05:24 PM

liked it

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

18 posted 2001-12-19 05:51 PM

*sigh* this one is so wonderful written....love it

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

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