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. . . Discovering you
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. . . Discovering you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
my eyes shall love you follow your topography drink in your beauty ~*~ my fingers shall roam circling peaks searching valleys discovering you ~*~ my lips embrace yours tenderly sipping your love again and once more ~*~ perfect gift given asking nothing in return receiving my all ~*~ slowly secrets bare sweet rapture reaches new heights how I cherish you ~*~ my love blankets you with soft whispers from my soul we are lost in time ~*~ we begin again more slowly with confidence ecstacy beckons ~*~ Inspired by:In OneTouch.......... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
romantic, passionate, sexy, are the descriptions that come to my mind upon reading your poem. I enjoyed reading this. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ONCORE..ha...yes, i think i like them  ~Victoria~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can SEA why you were so inspired... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ 'my fingers shall roam circling peaks searching valleys discovering you' Oh, YES~ Needless to say ... this moves me~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 this is so awesome Interloper, you have magic in your pen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such love and beauty fills every word of your heavenly senryus! (smiles) May true love forever blanket your heart and bring you eternal rapture! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awesome penned  Like it very much Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
My my...gettin a lil warm in here.... )))so so lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Did somebody turn up the heat? This is very sensual....and oh so good! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Interloper - I do like this writing, very warm and close. Nice, nice, nice... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I did not yet read the inspiration for this piece, but it must have been pretty hot!. Like this a lot.. Sandra |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Awesome and sensual. Standard Interloper fare! Admiring you at Passions. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So wonderfully sensual and tender, and such a nice way to spotlight another passionate poet! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The perfect romantic poem. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Interloper, you make me feel like taking up smoking again just to finish this off. Wow! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
perfect gift given asking nothing in return receiving my all That is truly perfect. The gift of giving selflessly and the discovery would be the recipients pleasure indeed! Bravo entirely! Sincerely, Regina |
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