Composing........(a sonnet)

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

0 posted 2001-12-19 01:18 PM

He washed my soul in invisible ink
Touching my heart with unwritten re-think
Penning poetic soft sensual sighs
With new vocabulary, for my eyes

Each word a new sensation, intense feel
Emotional lettering, in reveal
Language formed in touchings upon my skin
Versing this old ache dwelling deep within

Volumes of knowledge spilled forth from his well
Utterly erasing, protective shell
Evoking expression, unknown in me
Reading now aloud, unashamedly

It is with muse I do sweetly compose
Secrets of my heart in passionate prose

~SEA~

Mistletoe Angel

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1 posted 2001-12-19 01:27 PM

YAY!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Your sonnets are always soooooo beautiful, as is your beautiful muse! (big hugggsssss) Your soft sighs always bring sunshine and love through your writing, and your words weave together like pearls on a necklace, adorning such wonderful thoughts with your heart! (sigh) May your lovely heart forever compose such beautiful secrets and dreams in lovely verse! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Son Netier
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2 posted 2001-12-19 01:32 PM

I love a good sonnet, so naturally I love this.

Bill

SEA

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3 posted 2001-12-19 01:33 PM

Noah, you have the kindest heart

thank you.....

SEA

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4 posted 2001-12-19 01:33 PM

thank you Bill

and welcome

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-12-19 01:35 PM

SEA, this is more than charming. This is growth at its best, in many, many ways...

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-12-19 01:40 PM

Beautiful, gal, beautiful.
Lucky you and luck muse

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

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with you

7 posted 2001-12-19 01:42 PM

wow, thank you Sunshine, that is high praise from you!!! and that means a lot to me!

Shadowed_Innersense
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since 2001-12-05

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somewhere at the edge

8 posted 2001-12-19 01:42 PM

Your muse adds to the already soft touch of your pen ... VOLUMES!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

9 posted 2001-12-19 01:43 PM

Interloper, you snuck in there,

thank you

S_I, thank you so much, that is so nice of you

[This message has been edited by SEA (12-19-2001 01:44 PM).]

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13

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10 posted 2001-12-19 01:51 PM

I know that I replied to this before, in fact, on other threads I have replied, but those replies have disappeared or never registered, I don't get it.

Anway, with that said,

"Volumes of knowledge spilled forth from his well
Utterly erasing, protective shell

I loved those two lines most of all in this excellent write.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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11 posted 2001-12-19 03:45 PM

Susan,

You make this look so easy. Beautiful words written as usual my friend

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

12 posted 2001-12-19 03:59 PM

ohhhhh Sea I love it when you write like this....sooooooooooooooo lovely and sweet

excellent as always dear friend

(((hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

[This message has been edited by Charisma (12-19-2001 04:01 PM).]

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

13 posted 2001-12-19 05:34 PM

You have expressed the inspiration of real art, I think. And in a very good sonnnet. Excellent all around.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2001-12-19 07:42 PM

Sea, this is beautiful. I love it.

Balladeer

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15 posted 2001-12-19 07:51 PM

Very, very nice, SEA!

You paid great attention to the proper syllable count and, if you work on the iambic verse a bit, you will write sonnets as good as anyone.

Fine job here...

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