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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-12-19 10:02 AM



~*~

watching fall leafing
with summer's hope gone on breeze
winter springs again

~*~




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1 posted 2001-12-19 10:15 AM


Lady in White, I enjoyed your play on words. This short poem is full of nice images. Cheryl
Son Netier
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2 posted 2001-12-19 10:16 AM



~*~

watching fall leafing
with summer's hope gone on breeze
winter springs again

~*~

seeing snowflakes dance,
for memories of springtime,
warmth shared in the heart

Bill

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3 posted 2001-12-19 10:18 AM


This truly is a gem of great value. Very well done. A joy to read and see the vision you have woven. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2001-12-19 11:48 AM


excellent one...

regards,
sudhir

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5 posted 2001-12-19 12:22 PM


a beautiful lil gem lady......enjoyed it.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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6 posted 2001-12-19 01:48 PM


Princess sumerspring winterfall could not have said it better

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7 posted 2001-12-19 07:58 PM


Very nice..I like this!

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-12-19 08:00 PM


I like the pun!!
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9 posted 2001-12-19 09:04 PM


Lady In White - no words I can say, except beautiful...

BC

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