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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mood Blue picks up the temper of sound Deep specter of the trees surround The twisting dancing leaves of green Instruments of the midnight scene The brook run crystal o‘er the rocks Percussion sound like ticking clocks And shining eyes stared out the stark Life’s greenish orbs that light the dark. From blue to bluer darkness grew Before the wet of mornings dew The moon spew silver through the clouds And dressed the trees in ghostly shrouds. There’s magic in the dark of night Where phantoms live without the light. And worlds of mystery there are born Before the coming of the dawn It is a world of shaman awe That stretches into layman lore |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, this is a wonderful period peice that sets the mood so perfectly. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, the imagery of this is remarkable...you've painted quite the scene with your words...and I would ask one thing... paint on... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Thank you for the read and response. Sunshine, I'll try, *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Blue picks up the temper of sound Deep specter of the trees surround The twisting dancing leaves of green Instruments of the midnight scene The brook run crystal o‘er the rocks Percussion sound like ticking clocks And shining eyes stared out the stark Life’s greenish orbs that light the dark. From blue to bluer darkness grew Before the wet of mornings dew The moon spew silver through the clouds And dressed the trees in ghostly shrouds. ================================== It is a world of shaman awe That stretches into layman lore ==================================== OH MAN....could this poem be any COOLER!!YOU are the poet shaman!!  I dont know which is more impressive the imagery or cadence... As I was reading this aloud with out even realizing I was tapping my hand on the desk top and my foot was dancing with every rhyme DEEEVINE beat.... and the imagery makes me just smile at you and shake my head...then add in the luster of this clever mood setting theme your wrapped all your talents around...this is a very groovy poem Stinky...your write light years ahead of all us and we love watching your shooting star. How bout a ride on your comets tail  *winkiewinkie* Pen or palette you are the Master Craftsman.  meYou're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, your lovely words always set the modd of such extraordinary visions! (sigh) I love the night because I can easily contemplate when I look at the stars and gaze and meditate and visualize the heavens above! (smiles) It's a wonderful time of peace and relaxation! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are the flatter in the flattery The butter in the creamery. Just climb aboard Randys saddle And we'll disappear and skedaddle. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Mistletoe, Thank you for your read and kind remarkes. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ What a delightful poet you are ! ! ! ! ! ! 'The moon spew silver through the clouds And dressed the trees in ghostly shrouds.' Just doesn't get any lovely than that ! Love n' hugs~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a delight. Hugs Sy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed very much...im with Marge that was my favorite too..lovely..  ~Victoria~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
These words were not just typed, they were painted. I enjoyed reading this. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am delighted... to read this beauty... regards, sudhir |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sy, this is truly exceptional poetry! Keep going !!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, Thank you for the read and lovely. Opeth, A keen oservation, thank you. Sudhir, Thank you for the delight. Irish, Thank you and I'll try. *L* |
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