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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-16 04:53 PM

Shimmering eyes that do not hide
a love that flows within the tide.
Making one yearn to again see
those eyes that look back at me.

Truth behind a veil of brightness
making one want to again caress
Sparkling like fresh drops of dew
Oh..how I love those eyes, I do.

Looking out across distant space
so very much gracing your face
Giving me the thoughts of trust
For all time till we are again dust

Don’t ever lose the sparkle and gleam
Wash away any tears that do stream
Just remember I have seen those eyes
which cause more than just few sighs.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2001-11-16 05:43 PM

There's nothing quite like a pair of eyes to learn and yearn for everything there is... A nice ponder, Magnus.

-MVS

"If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller
http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 11-16-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-16 05:49 PM

The eyes are the windows of the soul...how true.
Good write as always Barry!

*Nancy scurries off to the kitchen to prepare the coffee...but, rushes back singing..."Look into my eyes and see my love....", oops sorry, back to the kitchen*

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

3 posted 2001-11-16 07:15 PM

Don't ever lose the sparkle and gleam
Wash away the tears that do stream
Just remember I have seen those eyes
Which cause more than just few sighs

Magnus,I like this.To know someone cares that much.You've done great.
Peaches

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-11-16 07:31 PM

eyes say a lot don't they? I really enjoyed reading this, it had a nice touch of emotionalism to it, not too much, but a nice feeling.

Kathleen
(Kay)

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-11-16 09:09 PM

Read me again,
lover see
everything
inside of me
understand
with heart do
feel
this love is
true, our love
is real
read me, darling
touch me deep
with tender words
I'll always keep...

enjoyed this!

*smiles*

~Tier

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-11-16 09:18 PM

Looking into one's eyes can speak volumes about a person. Much truth to your words, Magnus. The eyes never lie. Well done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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