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A mix for Son Netier |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Senryu ribbons curling 'round Santa soon he'll come to town clean the chimney quick Haiku cardinal sing clear holly berries bring one near red on red delight [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-18-2001 09:13 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) These are soooo gorgeous, sweet friend, better clean the chimney before Santa comes! (giggles) I love both of them so much, the cardinal sung to me in the last one! (kiss on cheek) Oooohhhh...I just know Son will love these! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful. Forgive my nitpicking, but .... they are both Senryus. Haikus must be all about nature without human or personal reference as the two pronouns you used "me and you." Now, if I am wrong, please accept my most heartfelt apology in advance and I shall do whatever penance you give me  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Whatever you wish to call them..... I call them, exquisite!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Lady, this is wonderful, informative and delightful, I will try to learn from your example. Bill |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Warm milk and cookies Waiting on the table top Children all asleep Lights upon the roof Beckon Santa Claus 'Stop Here' Merry Christmas all  |
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