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Ride the Sky (20 or less)
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Ride the Sky (20 or less) |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Dark clouds ride grey skies through the heavens ~ like genies on magic carpets Cheryl McClellan |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Welcome to Passions! Your first entry is wonderful! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I love this!! Welcome to Passions. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Great things come in small packages. I love this!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
CLAPPING WILDLY!!! WOW!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! (smiles) What a majestic debut your lovely heart sings! (smiles) Your beautiful words take us on magic carpet rides into your loving heart! Welcome to Passions, sweet Cheryl, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome, Cheryl. I like your thought provoking entrance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Cheryl...this is wonderful! Exquiste first post! Welcome to Passions! I know you will enjoy it here. ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Cheryl, I love the imagery you crammed in this little haiku. Lovely. Nan |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Cheryl and welcome to Passions. Such wonderful images you portrayed in so few words. I'll look forward to reading more. Take care........Sue Suetang |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice work, Cheryl. Welcome from me, also. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A special welcome to Passions and I look forward to seeing more of your work. PS - I love Haikus/Senryus a new poet here Passion's Poets welcome her we enjoy her work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Great first post, I enjoyed this greatly! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions..i am a haiku wannabe and i think that this one is perfect... great imagery  |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Welcome and well done. What more have we in store? -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love to look up at the clouds! WELCOME to passions!!! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A very nice first post. Welcome to pip, I hope you'll settle in and enjoy it here. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Cheryl - So glad to see you here. Actually it has been awhile since I have posted on any site myself. Liked the interesting analogy you drew between the clouds and the genies riding magic carpets. Well done. Dave (from MT) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! This is beautiful!! Please check your email for a special greeting!! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
A warm thanks to all who read and replied to this haiku. A really nice welcome too. It's nice to find a new place to share poetry and also find old friends from other sites. I'm enjoying reading everyone's work as well. Thanks again, Cheryl |
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