Night Whispers (a duet) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-12-18 02:41 PM

           “NIGHT WHISPERS”
a duet by Bill Charles & a friend
                ~~~~
Soft, the face of moon in rise,
as dark of night begins its trait,
can see you, whispers in these eyes,
of presence wrapped, awaiting fate…

I gaze with you softly, faces of the moon,
dark of night prevails, not our darkness,
for I see also you, and together soon,
one touch of you, forever ageless…

Each star that twinkles, patterns form,
shall draw upon these love thoughts, mine,
to light the way, to coat you warm,
nourish dreams, each night to dine…

Stars in the heavens, your face I see,
warm into my being, my love wanting,
lighting the dark, surrounded with me,
to dine, but also into the night, burning…

I send my whispers in the night
from lips that kiss, of gentle soul
to steal your breath, however slight,
to feel your touch, as night grows old…

My senses yours, my night whispers,
I give myself, my lips on you,
they steal my soul, break my barriers,
I seek your depths, as I explore…

I shall await your morning touch,
my breath is yours, in love of such…

You will not wait long this morning,
I breathe into you, your alluring…
                ~~~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-18 02:47 PM

BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! (big hugggssssss) You both are soooooooo romantic, sweet friends, the moonlight casts across your pens and into the hearts of true love in this beautiful vision of purity! (smmiles) May the spirit of love forever shine in your hearts and bring a sunrise of hope every morning to your eyes! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! YOU TWO MAKE A FABULOUS DUET!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) We all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-18-2001 02:47 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-12-18 05:19 PM

I shall await your morning touch,
my breath is yours, in love of such…

You will not wait long this morning,
I breathe into you, your alluring…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Well done, Bill and 'friend'.
Whoever your mystery poet/poetess is Bill you write wonderfully together!
I applaud you....Nancy.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-12-18 05:24 PM

Tell your friend she duets very well...

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2001-12-18 06:03 PM

Simply Beautiful,
Great job to the both of you.
I love it!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-12-18 06:40 PM

I believe I recognize the style of your duet partner

Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-12-18 11:08 PM

oh now this I love BC (you too friend. . .

). . .

just perfect. . . a wonderful interplay of shadow and voice. . .

keep listening. . .

----------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2001-12-18 11:58 PM

Bill darling boy this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. The flow and the rhythm are utterly excellent.

A duet sung so beautifully You sing in perfect harmony together

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-12-19 05:13 AM

Bill and Friend,
how so and sensual were these whispers. Excellent!
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2001-12-19 05:20 AM

This is a lovely collaboration ... such a gentle and soft flow to the words throughout. Very nicely written Bill and 'friend'!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

10 posted 2001-12-19 07:51 AM

The perfect duet, when voices meld and compliment the other, is this. *s

Merry Christmas, Bill and Friend.

Music, perfectly pitched,
Caresses the harshest curve.
--- Chanson deGest

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2001-12-19 10:13 AM

*sigh* a perfect match that leaves one feeling the sensual softness of your words. You have both blended your talents and created a masterpiece of romance and beauty. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2001-12-19 10:30 AM

liked it

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.