Open Poetry #17 |
Your Absolut Bond |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Your Absolut Bond I don’t hate you but the anger in me you have freed don’t know what you are thinking but you underestimate me you have now hurt someone that I truly love but this is your past and it , you can not rise above a man is as only as good as his word to the people that depend on you that word is never heard funny isn’t it how fairness comes around I go up as you go further down the empty phonies they cheer you as you drink from your absolut glass and ill protect the ones I love making our bonds last "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
||
© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved | |||
Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"a man is as only as good as his word to the people that depend on you that word is never heard" [b] that stanza froze me in my seat - Your frustration is alive in these words. My heart goes out to you, if this your reality. |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these words speak volumes. . . I like the spelling here of "Absolut". . . it's a great device helen. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Powerful, very powerful. I think I have an idea what this is about. Glad to see you have risen, and unfortunately, you can't do much to help those who want to drown. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
||
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!You speak from your heart and say exactly what you are feeling about this man who has hurt someone you care about. Very well done. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Slick, You said a mouth full, enjoyed the read. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |