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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-12-17 08:19 PM


It was Summertime when I first saw you
I watched you swimming in the turquoise sea
How on earth was I to know
From that day on you'd be with me

By the waters edge we walked at sunset
Two lovers side by side
Two hearts beating in unison
A love so powerful we could not hide

In Autumn you and I would go walking
Arm in arm we'd casually stride
Little did I know that in time
You'd choose me to be your bride

In the evening you took me dancing
So very slowly we moved to the beat
How very close were our two bodies
Together we generated so much heat

In Winter we'd snuggle by the roaring fire
While our love continually kept us warm
Such a strong bond we had together
As we felt we could weather any storm

In the Springtime you and I were married
I wore a garland of flowers in my hair
So mesmerized we were with one another
That it seemed like we were the only ones there

My love for you has never stopped growing
Like a flower I am always in bloom
Such an effect your love has upon me
As your love continually transports me to the moon

So no matter where life's road may lead us
I know we'll never be far apart
As I keep your love held securely
Inside a specially reserved place in my heart

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-17 08:23 PM


Oh, what a beautiful poem you have created here, I loved it very much!  I hope your love and tenderness to your lover lasts forever!

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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2 posted 2001-12-17 09:13 PM



Sue, lovely, lovely memories...

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-17 09:18 PM




(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Sue, this is soooooo beautiful! May he forever hold you close to his heart through every season of your life, giving you joy and happiness! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Sue, this is soooooo gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-17 09:20 PM


oh this is a beauty!!! I have been in love in the summer more than any other season hehehe

Joanna

Larry C
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5 posted 2001-12-18 12:04 PM


Sue,
I love all of the four seasons of your love! Romantic as ever. Thanks...  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-18-2001).]

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