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Hidden-Hutch
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Hidden-Hutch |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169
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Laurel trees, shaking, lips-touch. Blissful breeze, making, hidden-hutch. -------- -Derek |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may you and your love forever share true happiness together of true love! (sigh) Sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derek, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Is it a kiss hidden from the eyes of man with only the passion that burns within as witness to what has passed between them? *grin* even if this is not what you meant I sure love the vision it gave me. Thank you. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
Interpret it as you may, but I kinda wrote it thinking about my girlfriend's and my first kiss. It was windy out, the trees were shaking, but when our lips touched, we were in our own hidden hutch. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Streen- What a wonderful picture you've painted. Short and sweet...and I love it.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Derek~ What a lovely, lovely verse of thought~ Welcome to Passions~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Short. Concise. Good! |
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