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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-17 03:21 PM



                        Soaring

you said that what I write
are sad and pitiful things
in your attempt to crumble me up
but here I stand strong
my words have sprouted wings

on them alone I soar
a place of home I can stay
floating upon it’s calm
where words can be a friend
and I can write my pain away


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-17 03:24 PM


Fly, Lady, fly . . .
Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-17 03:35 PM


Show them how your words soar among the clouds filled with more talent and beauty than could ever been imagined. This poem has freedom's flight in its every word. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-17 04:44 PM




(smiles) Yes, always listen to your loving heart and never let others discourage you, for you have a golden heart that shines with so many lovely words, and may they all spread their wings and into your hopes and dreams! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your loving spirit always soar with beauty and inspiration! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-17 04:49 PM


Beautiful !!

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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