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Quoth the Kevin...Bring some more
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Quoth the Kevin...Bring some more |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Once upon a famous meter Passions proclaimed poet leader Tried to silence his new rival with old words he used before Everyone backed up this ringer Though he let the young one linger “Hardly had to lift a finger” Our hero said with tones so sure, Tis’ a child and nothing more With pen in hand he started plotting Laughing - all the while jotting Down the words that he foresaw would surely send his foe to floor Finishing he quickly “poe”-sted Grabbed a glass and vict’ry toasted Surely Kevin’s rear was roasted Roasted from this latest score, Tis’ a child and nothing more Suddenly there came reprisal In a form ever so vile It seems that two could play the game that one was deemed so special for And with confidence still growing Kevin took some pride in knowing The hot air his foe was blowing Couldn’t push him out the door, though a child and nothing more And balladeer who thought it done with Found he couldn’t just have fun with His young adversary who was proven solid to the core Laughing Kevin screamed and shouted I am not easily ousted It feeds me, how you have doubted Doubted what I have in store, Just a child…but maybe more [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Laughing Kevin screamed and shouted I am not easily ousted It feeds me, how you all have doubted Doubted what I have in store, Just a child…but maybe more ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kevin!!  This should scare him off!!  Oh Boy!!  I love this! Hugs, Nancy~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kevin, Only this and nothing more? LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Methinks there's something more in store, surely this weekend's more won't bore... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kevin, *chuckles* I can't wait to see what this weekend has in store....  It's so fun to be in the audience  Good job! Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good writing Kevin...James |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, you poe fella!  Gee, here I am, trying to be polite and I have this little terrier with his teeth in my ankle!  That boy has gotten himself in a little  (VERY nice return, Kevin. It's always good to have an adversary worth his salt....makes the victory so much sweeter!  |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
haha fun with pictures! i thought my last reply was rather polite...I'm having alot of fun Good sir...I hope you are too...and I Have worlds of respect for you |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You two keep this going all dark winter long????? PLEASE?????? Beats the telly you know Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/http://comm [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very well done, Kevin. This is such a hoot.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well Kevin, I'm impressed and I didn't think that was possible. I underestimated you. Very good round. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
worlds of respect mutually exchanged, my friend. You got my creative juices flowing again...I needed that!! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I'm with you Titia...can you guys keep it up all winter??? Laughter keeps me warm on those cold nights If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
rofl!!!!!!i missed this one.... Kevin, you're a riot!!! this is so funny.... i love this.... (oh and tracy..... lol!!!! i can't stop laughing.... great comment) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Great round Kevin, and I do believe you are up to mischief here, loving this as it sure does beat what is on the t.v.! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ This credit paid is credit due ... I certainly give that to you ... You have apprenticed at the throne of the greatest poet I have known~ Called him out in grandest style while keeping pace ... all the while~ Hats off to you, poet sir ... 'Tis more than child I must concur~ I raise the chalice in salute ... TWO poets joust in absolute ... First-class poetry ... Now ... keep it up~ You've certainly earned the right to stand beside the master Balladeer on this very night~ *I believe this 'jousting' has been so well-done, bring out the 'best' of both of you~ Good show, gentlemen~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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