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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-17 12:30 PM



      Focus


somewhere
in the middle
of me
I found
you
centered
at my core
an essence
nothing
equivalent to
far from
the fringe
of my
existence
is the
position
of your
presence
revolving
at this point
focus
of my
heart


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-17 12:42 PM


It seems that when it comes to our hearts we just can't tell them what to focus on. They seem to have a will all their own. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C
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2 posted 2001-12-17 01:04 AM


Helen,
I think all hearts feel better when they have a focus. Pleasant write. thanks  

rebekah33
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3 posted 2001-12-17 01:32 AM


How is it that some people become the focus of our hearts and souls...great piece, I especially liked the format!

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-12-17 06:28 PM




(smiles) Yes, the most influential and loving people that share with us such beautiful memories always focus and touch our hearts so enchantingly, and their love and words touch our hearts forever! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet Helen, your gorgeous words always touch all our hearts! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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