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Open Poetry #17

Silence Setting In

tearpearl
Junior Member

since 2001-12-14

Posts 17

0 posted 2001-12-17 12:10 PM

Silence setting in
as every breath she takes becomes
her last
lack of oxygen in the air
sulfur taking over
how could she have been
so bitter, bitter, bitter silence is setting in
as her struggling kicking body

stops, motionless
lack of life in her veins
blackness taking over
how could she have been
so bitter, bitter, bitter kiss
bitter touch
bitter tongue
bitter deeds
bitter words
bitter death

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

1 posted 2001-12-17 12:16 PM

Interesting piece, I'm not sure how i feel ( I may have to read it a couple of times

)Thanks for sharing!
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-12-17 12:36 PM

Feels like you are purging yourself of bitterness. Interesting write. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-17 06:15 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Oksana, this is so so sad, such bitter sorrow fills these words! (sigh) I hope this doesn't apply to afeeling you have right now, but if it is, my heart is always with you and we are always here for you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) So sad but well-written, sweet friend, may all these bitter tears become tears of hope and cheer! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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