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rebekah33
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0 posted 2001-12-17 12:13 PM


I walk behind her,
a pure example of perfection.
Her suit creased and fitted in all the right places.
Shoes, only an angel could wear,
to glide in.
Each step only made more beautiful
by the way the suit flows and walks with her.
And then there is her hair.
The perfect color, red with blond highlights,
bouncing and swaying with the beat of every step.

It is obvious she knows how beautiful she is,
as she says hello to all who admire her as they walk past.
And I'm walking behind her.
Proud to be seen within a few feet from such a lovely woman.
And I hope, each time the wind blows,
that the beauty and sofistication will slip off and become a part of me.


*Thought i would take a break from the love poems  

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-17 12:19 PM


*giggling* and she is hoping to achieve some of the talent you spread around. You have the same beauty and grace...but we never see it in ourselves. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rebekah33
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2 posted 2001-12-17 01:42 AM


Thanks Startime...that means a lot  
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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3 posted 2001-12-17 02:19 AM


Beautiful...in your own right.
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4 posted 2001-12-17 06:32 PM



(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (sigh) The beauty and grace of self-love shines in this glorious vision your heart weaves with a smile of joy! (smiles) You always grace these lovely blue ages with your loving heart, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-12-18 07:57 AM


love this... and how could i not... being a red head...(giggle)...helen
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6 posted 2001-12-18 08:32 AM


Rebekah,
It reads good to me, enjoyed.

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7 posted 2001-12-18 09:26 AM



This feels so good. How pleasant to see a poet who can write so wonderfully of others...

this one likes me very very much, and is a Keeper!

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