Open Poetry #17 |
In the Middle of a Thought |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
When I passed by you, I just couldn't get my eyes off yours. My eyes wandered around in circles Following you in the room To where you were standing, Or where you were dancing. My mind was so lost That I couldn't walk right. I kept crashing into things The moment you were out of sight, Was the moment I found you again. My heart felt the dam has broken When I saw your eyes match mine. I don't recall how you dance, I was so fixed on your smile. All I remembered was the atmosphere Of my mind Which was just like the air of the room Jumping out to you. When I next saw you, I could hardly breath. Every picture of you Reminded me of that night. Lizzy Vivian http://members.shaw.ca/home0/ ~A little sour add to taste of life. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, Vivien, sounds like someone just stole your heart with one look. It's nice to see you again. I enjoyed reading this. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wow, this is great. Peaches |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
LOL, my friend asked me to describe his feeling for me. I was joking with him when I did this. ~A little sour add to taste of life. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee, this is like love at first sight! I remember feelings like this...a while ago..well quite awhile ago...okay, it was a long time ago..but, I remember how it feels! Good writing here Vivian, ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I like this very much... I've felt this way before great job Vivian |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think we all have felt this way before, and you write it so well!! *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
how do you make smile or funny faces in message? using HTML? is that allowed? I never used HTML here. ~A little sour add to taste of life. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
click on the html help tag below and you will learn everything that you need to know!! It's right there under quick view I am sure that it will help you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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