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Lost Trust |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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This is not about me although I too have felt this pain as I think many of us have. How I wish this world we live in was an easier place for hearts that only seek honesty and caring...my heart goes out to any who have experienced Lost Trust... Lost Trust It always comes unbidden a cold wind filled with ice freezing a heart that's open with little secrets hidden Games played again and again to use the heart and abuse confidence given in truth is used to give hurt and pain Words used to drive from the place where safety was to be found for a heart that was to love all those of the human race Now many lies and deceit have been used to hide the truth but the soul had not been blind to the workings of this feat There is hurt and loss of trust of one who plays these mind games with dark secrets that destroy as the end comes from Lost Trust Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Familiar terrain, Karen... It's not easy to remain optimistic and idealistic in an environment of cyclical Trust-decimation. Perhaps one of the greatest challenges: to maintain one's faith in man... -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Karen, lost trust never leaves a person. Oh, you can put it out of your mind most of the time, but it changes you inside. I'm glad this isn't about you now. It's so sad. Once trust is broken, only a miracle can restore it and things are rarely nver be the same again. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Karen, I'm so happy this doesn't relate to you anymore! (sad sigh) This is soooooo heartbreaking, and my heart cries out to so many detached from each other and hearts broken in lost trust! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet star! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karen, this is very sad, indeed. I lost my trust when I was ver, very young. It is so hard for me to trust anyone. But, I do try. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This reminds me of a topic that I posted... None of us is perfect...but to decieve to gain affection or to lead someone down a path of lies is cruel...very cruel... We all want trust..and most of us want to be trusted.. well written Karen...and I too am glad this is not about yourself...for, as your friend, that would upset me greatly... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Well put Karen. I think we have all known people who have destroyed our trust in them. Hopefully though, it does not cause us to mistrust others who come into our lives afterwards. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, You give voice to issues few address but need to be spoken. I love your approach to life!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, I echo Larry's thoughts here exactly. You dare to write of those issues which bother us all and you do it in such a tender way. Good write. ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so true, startime..and written with emapathy and compassion. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well done, Karen. I wish I did not understand so well. Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh yes, Trust can be lost within an instant and take years to rebuild. I know what it's like to be betrayed, and it is the WORST feeling in the world. It's an unbearable pain when you put your heart in someone's hands and they smash their hands together and crush your heart. (Hugs) RP |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I lost what little trust I had when I was little.It makes it very hard to trust anyone.Sad but truthful write. Peaches |
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