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The motive... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Propelled unto the tides of pandemonium Mounting atop roaring white caps of passion Suspended purposeless devoid of essence Drifting weightless towards desolate shore Thrusting boldly hiding all fear Tangled ensnared no longer free Spiraling exhilaration collapsing at seams Surrendered imprisoned by his jealousy The motive lust so it may seem revealing a simple truth to me that one day love will embrace me... *~coco~*  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-16-2001).] |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
(((HUGS))) I really loved the poem,,,,but then the picture I loved equally as well. Got a double smile with that one. ~TimothysAngel *Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same* ~Emily Bronte' |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully descriptive Coco, and to be complimented by this lovely picture as well ... what a wonderful read, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What intensity of yearning displayed here dear Coco...A beautiful poem, as always, beautifully presented with a perfect graphic! Love your style, lady! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet CocoBaci! (big hugggssss) Love will find your golden heart, sweet friend, and you will forever after feel lifes joy as the wings of your heart spread to loves happiness! (sigh) Dreams can come true, sweet friend, always believe in your heart! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, your poem and the image are both sooooooooo breathtakingly beautiful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet CocoBaci, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Great poem and beautiful picture! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Coco, this is very, very passionate!!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Tim, thank you very much for taking a peak at this poem and your kindess in reply means alot2me PoetFriend... Kit, my heart hugzUsweetPoetFriend and I thank you for taking a moment to let me know you stopped by... Serenity, my dearsweetGal it's sooooo nice2see you passed thru this page blue cuz I kinda was hoping I'd get a chance2see you here b4Christmas cuz you always make my heart smile... Mistletoe, you are sooooooo kind dear Noah and I thank you from the bottom of my heart... Possom, now thaz a cute lil name you got there PoetFriend, anyhow I'd like2say thank you2u for the sweet comments you made in your reply2me... IrishRose, it's always a special treat2have you drop in here and leave me word of your impressions from a poem shared with all of you and I appreciate very much you having done so with lots of hugsNsmiles2u... HaPPy HoliDays PoetFriends *~coco~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Let us hope so...the embrace...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
James my dearest PoetFriend, what can I say2u but ya just made me smile sweetie... Thanx4stopping by on this one I had wrote a while back... Muaah on cheekz2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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