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Neon Rain
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Neon Rain |
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tearpearl Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 17 |
Neon rain from a neon sky magenta sand seeping through my fingers every grain the face of a clock time goes by, flowing as the river to the open see alive everything around breaths and aches of life all it's pains and tortures yet all is washed away with neon rain in the purple colored eyes of twelve winged angels |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh my this is so lovely... wonderful employ of imagery and metaphor. a beautiful bittersweet write!! Its not like you to say sorry, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! Oh Oksana, your beautiful pen always paints such beautiful surreal visions and emotions! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! You truly are an angel to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Magenta sand and neon rain.... Interesting imagery, how life slips away. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
As I missed your first post: Welcome tearpearl. Great imaginary in this poem, I like it Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Welcome to passions, a lovely poem i have read here, can't wait to read more! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'yet all is washed away with neon rain in the purple colored eyes of twelve winged angels' A belated welcome to Passions...and, this is some very good writing...I love the image of these last few lines, and the whole poem...great write! sp   And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Beautiful use of colors...Welcome to Passions!!!!! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What a colorful and beautiful vision you have painted with your words. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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