Open Poetry #17 |
Defeating the Clouds |
Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Defeating the Clouds by Randy Meador The dark days, The cloudy sky, The raing pummeling my head, Are no longer present You entered my suddenly dark life Defeating these dark clouds and rain To shower me in nothing but happiness and joy You give me my light Keep these dark days out of my sight The beautiful flowers onpen up to your light light that surpasses through the deep blue skies Forever I wish to live this life Feeling like a king, you as my georgeous queen In return, I give you my care, my love, and most important my heart A heart which beats just for you The one who gave me my light a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
BEAUTIFUL....THIS IS A WONDEROUSLY BEUTARIFFIC PIECE OF SPECTACULARIFFIC POETICA FANTASTICA....phew i need to calm down Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
This is beautiful Randy!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wonderful write. Peaches |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (smiles) Always look for the sunshine in life, for love alone produces it and your heart always radiates with it. (sigh) I am happy to see that you are happy, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Randy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Have I mentioned I love LOVE!!! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hypnosis- Beautifully penned thoughts. Really enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I so love to read of people in love. You pen your heart with a beauty that makes me sigh. Wonderful writing. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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