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something i wanted to say |
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tearpearl Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 17 |
I wanted to cry today Because you were feeling down Said you missed your old girlfriend Why? You say she was the best I wonder if I could ever take her place To be the one there for you Shower you with love And embrace you tight, while you sigh I haven’t known you for long But I feel so close Or maybe I’m just being foolish I couldn’t exactly say There is a deep feeling in my heart An ache, for you I say I’m sorry when you’re down And I wish I could bring you up again I tried to tell you I loved you But I couldn’t bring the words to my lips I was scared That you would say no Do you ever realize that I try I try to show you that I care Do you see that in my eyes Do you feel it, deep inside I’m giving myself away To you, and all that you are I want to be The one with you, standing beside you Honestly I do, and I wish I could send This poem to you But once again I’m scared That you’ll tell me to leave |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Oksana, I know just how you feel, and my heart goes out to you! (sigh) Tell him how you feel, for love is a feeling that should always be shared, for if you hold it secret longer, you may regret what you did in the end. Tell him how you feel, for I know deep down if his love is real, he'll happily say how he feels too and will love you always for who you are! (big hugggssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so very much and wish you the best!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Oksana, This is so heartfelt and tender. Reminds me of a poem I did about wanting to tell someone almost the same thing but the words kept getting in the way. Nice write dear. ~Hugs, Nancy~  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I think that people know when you love them...it's always great to hear...but just as we recognize the anger in someone's disposition, we can also identify the love that's present in gentle eyes. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I can understand these feelings very well. You have opened up your heart with this poem. Hopefully, one day you will be able to show him your heart and this poem, and he will appreciate both. In the meantime, loves angst does provide for some great poetry. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Give it some time, if the other one's heart is on the "rebound" they may not be ready to hear you yet. Just be there, as you are now. But when that door opens? Step inside. |
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Lord Kelath Von Saint Junior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 16 |
Bravisimo!!! the feelings are all there! i know this pain. ive had it for soo long. but alas, things can change. it only takes that step to move forward...be strong. and you will prosper....With Care. -Lord Kelath |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
NEVER be afraind to LOVE someone or something....this is a lesson that I speak from experience about. Sometimes, those four little letters can cahnge your life, and If in the end it wasn't meant to be...it wasn't a waste of time...atleast not to me. TimothysAngel *Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same* ~Emily Bronte' |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions enjoyed |
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