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thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

0 posted 2001-12-15 06:26 PM

Oh little child so near the tree
The precious view you clearly see

Adorned in white, a glistened sight
A chilling warmth, it's nearly night

Excitement grows within each eye
A splendid match, so bright yet shy

You make each wish, each secret part
A ray with God, so fills your heart

Your wants are small, unselfish child
Not to be wrapped, branded or styled

A world of hope, filled full of peace
A caring call, let love increase

Next year this child so wants to be
Back out to watch, this growing tree

What of our choice as time rolls by
Will hope and peace and love climb high

[This message has been edited by thepoeticplumber (edited 12-15-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-15 06:30 PM

(sigh) God Bless that sweet child, I too join the child in prayer for a world of love and harmony for all! (sigh) I pray that together someday our dream can come true! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such sensitivity and innocence fills this poem! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-12-15 07:57 PM

*sigh* a gentle poem that touches the heart and soul. I love it. **hug**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-12-15 08:27 PM

This is very nice! I love it! Well done! ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

tearpearl
Junior Member

since 2001-12-14

Posts 17

4 posted 2001-12-15 08:38 PM

this is really beautiful..

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2001-12-15 08:42 PM

Nice job...it shows a lot of sensitivity.
Happy holidays

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (edited 12-15-2001).]

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2001-12-15 09:07 PM

Touching couplets! *s

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-12-15 11:51 PM

Christ~mas couplets at that! Wonderfully done.

~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-12-16 12:25 PM

Well said...very well said...thank you
for giving us this to read..

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

9 posted 2001-12-16 02:14 PM

A world of hope, filled full of peace
A caring call, let love increase

Yes..let love do just that and more. I enjoyed this dearly. Peace and Poetry to you!

Sincerely,
Regina

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