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The Secrets of Love
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The Secrets of Love |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
How do you hold on to him, mesmerize him with your charms? Why is it that he sees you when he holds me in his arms? There was a time when you were his angel, his darling wife. My dearest wish is to be his love, the light of his life. I know you have the answers and power over me, so tell the secrets of his love so in his heart I may be. (Just a train of thought here guys, not a reality. Trying to express something but probably not very well.  Andrea) Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Andrea, Are you trying to live up to your misguided angel name, huh? LOL That is a difficult topic you chose, ya know. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I think you conveyed the thoughts of someone in this situation very well, actually. enjoyed. I am many. |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Larry, somehow I think I have already earned the misguided angel tag And yeah I did discover it is a difficult topic.Siofra, thanks for reading and understanding what I had to say. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MisguidedAngel~ I thought you projected the situation very aptly~ Thanks for sharing doll !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
misguided angel... It is a difficult topic to write on, but I think you've succeeded! I really enjoyed this. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
It makes sense to me, you wrote it well. Best wishes, RP |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I agree with all above that you captured these feelings very well in this difficult topic. Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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