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Fallacy of Harmony
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Fallacy of Harmony |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
We lay, so fervently in wait For the days of solitude to end. The magic soul to appear To change our lives for the better. But, too many times we wait in vain Watching foreign faces for a sparkle of love. They all look the same, these faces, And life becomes desolately bare. Pledging never to need wrapping Of our bodies with another's. Heads raised in blatant defiance Against burried hopes and dreams. The visions in our nightly rest Recall against us our fondest fantasies Teasing, tantalizing and feigning unreality as truth To our unsuspecting vulnerable mind. Oh, to never need or desire This my unspoken, unthought intrigue. Falacies, too many unforgivable faults. People look too deep, yet not deep enough at all. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) It saddens me to see so many say they're sorry, but they never look deep enough in their heart to honestly forgive and have areputation to harm anothers heart again! (sad sigh) My heart cries out to all these people, and I pray they can find love that can understand them. (sigh) So sad but well-written, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this poem is filled with truth and yet still I would lose myself in my fantasies where I can pretend love waits for me. You have written it in such a way that the reader sees beyond the dreams. Very well done. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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