Open Poetry #17 |
Raindrops.... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
raindrops fall onto me trickle across my soul touching me like nothing else can raindrops ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooo soft and beautiful your vision is, sweet friend! (big hugggsss) I love hearing the raindrops patter the windows and leaves and sing like angel tears. (sigh) Your visions are always so lovely, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I love them all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, ok, I won't go with the obvious and say you're all wet, and neither is this....it's tender and lovely. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Your thoughts are as refreshing as the rain~ Loving this~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is good, Sea. I really like this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue~It's raining here and this fits perfectly. I love it! Hugs. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Sea Well I used to hate rain until I read this lovely write.Perhaps now I will look past the wet part of it.Very nice! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks, it was supposed to snow last night, instead I got gobs of rain and sodpossom, wet is the best part about the rain.... that and the sound thanks friends |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is a great change of pace with all the holiday poems, nothing against that of course, but jeez, I'm feeling sick from candy canes and butterscotch!!! yeah, I reemember rain in California |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words reminded me of how much I loved playing in the rain, letting it wash over me... Mother always swore I was going to get sick, no matter how warm the weather. *G* I enjoyed this, SEA... and the walk down memory's pathway. *S* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Just wonderful Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Saw the title and knew it had to be SEA, and pleased am I it was...for the beauty of her words touches me.... jwesley |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, If it's raining, put me in the attic. Gotta love that sound! Beautiful write. Thanks. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to love the rain because of where I live, or do I? Lovely Susan. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--lovely lines of rain painted poetry. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Rain drops always make me think of music. I find the sound to be soothing. Wonderful poem that had that special feel to it. **hug** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
In the way I now see a can of Spam and think of Balladeer, so I think of you when it rains. Funny the things that change our view of reality. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much...the rain ended fairly early this morning, but the clouds afterwards were amazing to say the least....I was very glad I wasn't the one driving today LOL and Duncan, I know what you mean, and thank you, I am touched |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
I love the feeling of raindrops on my skin. Everytime it rains, I try to go outside and stand with my eyes closed, face to the heavens, and just let the water roll over me. It's amazingly soothing. This piece reminds me so much of those moments. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully done!! Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
grab a good book, cuddle up on a comfy sofa out of reach of kids and hubby and spend the day being sinfully neglectful of everything but yourself. That is, of course, IF it rains. Nice, Susan...much enjoyed, sweet friend. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sea,I love the sound of rain when I go to bed. I really enjoyed this. Juanita |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
driven rain stings my eyes still, I look straight ahead since no one can tell the raindrops from tears There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. byron [This message has been edited by Jamie (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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