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0 posted 2001-12-14 09:57 AM



raindrops
fall onto me
trickle across my soul
touching me like nothing else can
raindrops

~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-14 10:01 AM




(sigh) Sooooooo soft and beautiful your vision is, sweet friend! (big hugggsss) I love hearing the raindrops patter the windows and leaves and sing like angel tears. (sigh) Your visions are always so lovely, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I love them all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-14 10:19 AM



Ok, ok, I won't go with the obvious and say you're all wet, and neither is this....it's tender and lovely.


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3 posted 2001-12-14 10:42 AM


SEA~
Your thoughts are as refreshing as the rain~
Loving this~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-12-14 11:30 AM


This is good, Sea. I really like this.
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5 posted 2001-12-14 11:37 AM


Sue~It's raining here and this fits perfectly.  I love it!  Hugs.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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6 posted 2001-12-14 11:41 AM


Sea

Well I used to hate rain until I read this lovely write.Perhaps now I will look past the wet part of it.Very nice!

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7 posted 2001-12-14 12:01 PM


thanks, it was supposed to snow last night, instead I got gobs of rain   and sodpossom, wet is the best part about the rain.... that and the sound   thanks friends  
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8 posted 2001-12-14 02:51 PM


this is a great change of pace with all the holiday poems, nothing against that of course, but jeez, I'm feeling sick from candy canes and butterscotch!!!

yeah, I reemember rain in California

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9 posted 2001-12-14 03:06 PM


Beautiful.

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10 posted 2001-12-14 03:47 PM


Your words reminded me of how much I loved playing in the rain, letting it wash over me... Mother always swore I was going to get sick, no matter how warm the weather. *G*

I enjoyed this, SEA... and the walk down memory's pathway. *S*

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11 posted 2001-12-14 10:29 PM


Susan,

    Just wonderful  

Hugs,
Tara

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12 posted 2001-12-14 11:09 PM


Saw the title and knew it had to be SEA, and pleased am I it was...for the beauty of her words touches me....


jwesley

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13 posted 2001-12-14 11:21 PM


SEA,
If it's raining, put me in the attic. Gotta love that sound! Beautiful write. Thanks.  

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14 posted 2001-12-14 11:24 PM


I have to love the rain because of where I live, or do I?  Lovely Susan.
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15 posted 2001-12-14 11:30 PM


Sea--lovely lines of rain painted poetry.  
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16 posted 2001-12-15 12:38 PM


Rain drops always make me think of music. I find the sound to be soothing. Wonderful poem that had that special feel to it. **hug**

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17 posted 2001-12-15 02:44 AM


In the way I now see a can of Spam and think of Balladeer, so I think of you when it rains.  Funny the things that change our view of reality.
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18 posted 2001-12-15 02:48 AM


thank you all so much...the rain ended fairly early this morning, but the clouds afterwards were amazing to say the least....I was very glad I wasn't the one driving today LOL and Duncan, I know what you mean, and thank you, I am touched  
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19 posted 2001-12-15 02:55 AM


I love the feeling of raindrops on my skin.  Everytime it rains, I try to go outside and stand with my eyes closed, face to the heavens, and just let the water roll over me.  It's amazingly soothing.  This piece reminds me so much of those moments.

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20 posted 2001-12-15 09:53 AM


Beautifully done!!

Charisma

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21 posted 2001-12-15 11:34 AM


grab a good book, cuddle up on a comfy sofa out of reach of kids and hubby and spend the day being sinfully neglectful of everything but yourself.    That is, of course, IF it rains.    Nice, Susan...much enjoyed, sweet friend. (((hugs)))

Michael

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22 posted 2001-12-15 11:36 AM


enjoyed
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23 posted 2001-12-15 01:10 PM


Sea,I love the sound of rain when I go to bed.
I really enjoyed this.

Juanita

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24 posted 2001-12-15 02:30 PM


driven
rain stings my eyes
still, I look straight ahead
since no one can tell the raindrops
from tears

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

[This message has been edited by Jamie (edited 12-15-2001).]

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