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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-12-15 10:57 AM






Restless Mind

Silver ribbon stream
Serene view in black and white
Frame near tomorrow
Where raindrops sing song of hope
A comfort for restless minds




~*Theresia~*  

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-15-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-12-15 11:54 AM


yes, dear Charisma   this is beautiful  
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2 posted 2001-12-15 12:16 PM


Rain always has that soothing effect.
Very serene, Charisma  

Music, perfectly pitched,
Caresses the harshest curve.
--- Chanson deGest



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3 posted 2001-12-15 12:20 PM


serene scene and poem...ahhhhhhhhhh

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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4 posted 2001-12-15 01:37 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo lovely, sweet Charisma, your beautiful voice spreads silver linings across every inch of sky and lights hope and love through every lovely vision! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-12-15 01:39 PM


Oh my gosh...what an astonishing poem to go with a spectacular view. I am speechless. **hugs** I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-12-15 02:10 PM


lovely Charisma...love the mysterious pic too...yes prayer and hope
will do wonders for the soul...hugss

                                     ~Victoria~

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7 posted 2001-12-15 02:57 PM


Sea: thank you for the beautiful dear friend  

chansondegeste: yeah the sound of rain can be very soothing, thank you for coming in and taking time to reply  

Vas: so glad that I could share the serenity with you....glad that you liked it  

Noah: it is always a pleasure to share with you, your replies are always kind and so open. Thank you dear friend  

Startime: sooooooo glad that you love it, thank you for coming in, even that you were speechless for a moment  

Victoria: Yes amazing isn't it, how we can find hope and prayers in nature's embrace. Thank you dear lady for your kind comment  

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8 posted 2001-12-15 03:40 PM


This would surely soothe a restless mind...James
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9 posted 2001-12-19 03:20 PM


Charisma~
STUNNINGLY LOVELY~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-12-19 03:43 PM


Charisma,

       I do love your tankas Beautiful.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2001-12-19 03:49 PM



HUGS from me too
Your the best tankawriter

Titia

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12 posted 2001-12-19 04:20 PM


What a wonderful Tanka.  I love it!

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13 posted 2001-12-19 05:22 PM


Yes, I like this too.  Very peaceful.
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14 posted 2001-12-19 05:37 PM


You do this form of poetry so incredibly!
((hugs))

Joanna

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15 posted 2001-12-19 05:40 PM



Charisma!  Your Muse is back!  Hooray!

And this?  This was Very Very good!

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16 posted 2001-12-19 09:17 PM


Charisma - I have just read the beautiful words that a restless mind can write...

BC

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17 posted 2001-12-20 04:13 PM


Thank you all  for your kind and wonderful comments, it is always sooooo good to see you here. (((hugs)))

Theresia

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