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Restless Mind.......Tanka
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Restless Mind.......Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Restless Mind Silver ribbon stream Serene view in black and white Frame near tomorrow Where raindrops sing song of hope A comfort for restless minds ~*Theresia~* [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, dear Charisma  this is beautiful |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Rain always has that soothing effect. Very serene, Charisma Music, perfectly pitched, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
serene scene and poem...ahhhhhhhhhh Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo lovely, sweet Charisma, your beautiful voice spreads silver linings across every inch of sky and lights hope and love through every lovely vision! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...what an astonishing poem to go with a spectacular view. I am speechless. **hugs** I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Charisma...love the mysterious pic too...yes prayer and hope will do wonders for the soul...hugss ~Victoria~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea: thank you for the beautiful dear friend chansondegeste: yeah the sound of rain can be very soothing, thank you for coming in and taking time to reply Vas: so glad that I could share the serenity with you....glad that you liked it Noah: it is always a pleasure to share with you, your replies are always kind and so open. Thank you dear friend Startime: sooooooo glad that you love it, thank you for coming in, even that you were speechless for a moment  Victoria: Yes amazing isn't it, how we can find hope and prayers in nature's embrace. Thank you dear lady for your kind comment |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This would surely soothe a restless mind...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ STUNNINGLY LOVELY~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Charisma, I do love your tankas Beautiful.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
HUGS from me too Your the best tankawriter Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a wonderful Tanka. I love it! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, I like this too. Very peaceful. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You do this form of poetry so incredibly! ((hugs)) Joanna |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma! Your Muse is back! Hooray! And this? This was Very Very good! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Charisma - I have just read the beautiful words that a restless mind can write... BC |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for your kind and wonderful comments, it is always sooooo good to see you here. (((hugs))) Theresia |
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