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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Perhaps Perhaps in some future cause, I’ll bring your mind to pause. Perhaps in some future time, I’ll touch and ring your chime. Perhaps in some time above I’ll have you as my future love. Perhaps, perhaps beyond the taps, I’ll make the lapse collapse. Would you, could you share my mind A Shangri-la that we could find A place beyond the mundane thing A place of green and ever spring Perhaps in some future day, perhaps in some future way Perhaps in some future morn, perhaps in some future dawn Perhaps by some future shove, perhaps in some future love Perhaps, perhaps beyond the taps, I’ll make the lapse collapse. I promise you to share your mind I promise you this place to find. I promise you eternals much I promise you forever’s touch. You have my ever full adore I cannot promise anymore. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For as the sun would round the earth as each new day is given birth you grant me well my lovesome's worth for I would rage before the dearth but with each flutter of your bye you bring complete one lovesong's sigh shoot, you've gone and inspired me again... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Perhaps in some future cause, I’ll bring your mind to pause. Perhaps in some future time, I’ll touch and ring your chime. Perhaps in some time above I’ll have you as my future love. Perhaps, perhaps beyond the taps, I’ll make the lapse collapse. Would you, could you share my mind A Shangri-la that we could find A place beyond the mundane thing A place of green and ever spring ===================================== I promise you to share your mind I promise you this place to find. I promise you eternals much I promise you forever’s touch. You have my ever full adore I cannot promise anymore. =================================== Well, this is just a big ole friggen*SIGH*waiting to happen  my oh my ... Sy oh Sy ... *sigh* oh *sigh* Good Grief ...you really dont play fair Stinky ... Now hows a girl supposed to resist this? *L* I was just getting ready to run out the door to the grocery store and then I find this verse of adore. *S* I dont need no sugar in me tea this morn...this is so sweet Im on a sugar rush. OH and Stinky....all these "perhaps" you speak of--you dont have to wait for "taps" you have already kept all these promises...and then some. Trust me ... *winkiewinkie*  mePS: I just had to laugh at this line... "Would you, could you share my mind" You are brave doing the "would you could you" rhymes after what it inspired the last time LOL Dr Seuss is still recovering from my mangling of his word play.  ROFLWould I could I share YOUR MIND?..... OH YEAH!!!!!! (does that include walking barefoot on your beaches of understand?) *L* There is a phrase inspiring many in here of late from the challenge Lady put up .... This poem from you brings it to mind.... "You are there ... here with me"   [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, those last two lines and the candles on the perfect cake, they light up the poem. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Seymour,loved it   Juanita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--If I were a cat, you would be my meow. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*....Sey this is sooooooo sweet and lovely done.....love it!!!  Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I promise you to share your mind I promise you this place to find. I promise you eternals much I promise you forever’s touch. You have my ever full adore I cannot promise anymore." doing that heart stealing thing again I love this |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ENJOYED!!! especially the 'lapse collapse' line  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) CLAPPING WILDLY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, SWEET FRIEND!!! (big hugggssssss) It will come true someday, and it will most definitely be a love come true! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Seymour, may timelapse collapse into infinite sweet moments of timeless love! (sigh) I love it! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...such a poem of promise. I love it...your words are so heartfelt and sincere. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful poets that responded to the poetry, my humble thanks and love. I will read and respond to yours when I can. I try to put one poem in a day. Since there are so many members of the forum alot of good poetry just disappears. Forgive me if I cannot respond to all. Thank you my friends. JM, Now you are a whole other matter. You cannot contain butterflies and I would not, even if I could. So I will continue to follow you through the fields of colver and wonder at the aura of your hue. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Perhaps...with you..that would most certainly still be a dream. A star way to heaven...perhaps. You glow ya know! I always love it when you make Janet shout! Sincerely, Regina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You are there ... here with me ... *winkiewinkie*  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I promise you to share your mind I promise you this place to find. I promise you eternals much I promise you forever’s touch. You have my ever full adore I cannot promise anymore. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WOW!! SY! I could hear Janet Marie hollerin up here in Canada! As for me?! Didn't you hear me sigh??!! ......perhaps? Love this I do! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Regina, Me too and you glow too. *L* JM, I know, Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Nancy, Yes I did. *L* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Boy that was a lot of promises there and I have to tell you that I haven't met a man yet that could fulfill all those so if you can do all that, I am sending you the airfare LOL *wink* just kidding JM you put down that baseball bat will ya? Oh heavy sigh this was what in Canada we call a real good "reeler" (as in reeling them in) and I don't mean fish either! LOL Very romantic there my friend.~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Would I, could I..love this poem? I know there is a perfect word out there for how much I enjoyed this..but it is escaping me. Sandra |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is so absolutely wonderful that I can't think of a proper response. Beautiful! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Flawless rhythm!!! When reading the responses I knew someone would bring up Suess...although, this is more tantalising to the adult reader...hee,hee!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dogonnit! Janet Marie stole my response!  So I'll just say....good work, Sy!! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sy, you are far too good to us. We so look forward to your once-a-day postings... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, Can I drive instead. LOL *L* Sandra, Then it's one of the very few. LOL *L* Angel, Thanks for the beautiful. Amysemi, Yes more for the adult reader thank you Balladeer, From you that's enough. Thank you sweet Lady. *L* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
but who could ever want or need any more? ...helen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Slick, I agree. *L* |
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