A Poets Window, Pane 6 (RACEY)

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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2001-12-14 11:50 PM

This is about a series of different views in our emotions.

Pane 6: This window is best shared.

Oh window of love
My favorite view comes
Lets cuddle
In this steamy window

So let us see in the flesh of day
Then caresses the light out
For playing in the dark can be fun
In the aromas of the long night

In the sigh of perfection
We can join together
Floating so high
That you might fly off a cliff
Hanging on by your fingernails of needs
That keeps you right on the very edge
Taking all of you in wrestling arms

And in the satin backgrounds
Silken words sing into our emotions
That darken your image right into me

Yes touch me ever so tender
As to create that special heat
That only two can exhaust into whimpers

Let the whispers of the winds outside
Electify my name into you
Branding you as mine
But just for a time

For this conquest is too fun
To do it once
And each time will bring invisible marks
That will bring stronger music
To repeat from

So mark my pane as fragile
So as to not break the glass
Even that it has been reinforced
From the past loves
For there are times
It lets in too much heat
In the passion of opening my window
A little too far

Yes, window you have gone far
For the bliss climaxes in the serenity
Of two sleeping as one
Holding each other
In the magnetism
That opposites attract

D.Lester Young (12/14/01)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-15-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-14 11:58 PM

Oh my gosh...be careful you have set this star to sizzling. This poem is sensually beautiful. Absolutely magnificent. Oh yes, I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-12-15 12:05 PM

A sensual expression of love. Well done.

"Yes touch me ever so tender
As to create that special heat
That only two can exhaust into whimpers"

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2001-12-15 12:09 PM

D.,
Almost seems like a voyeurs window. Good thing it's all steamed up!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-15 12:11 PM

WOW!!! I don't know if this will survive in Open much longer, but I love the voice of this writing! (sigh) Very sensual and passionate this is! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet eagle, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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