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0 posted 2001-12-09 03:39 PM




Midnight Kiss

Feeling you lay so close to my side
Your warmth, soft, reaching out to me
I smile softly into the surrounding night
Your chest rises and falls with every breath
My heart sings with happiness and joy
Knowing your heart beats with love for me
My eyes take in your strong loving arms
That hold me close, make me feel so safe
Your hands rest quietly at your still side
I can almost feel them stroke my hair
In the comforting way that only you could do.
I look over to see your sleeping profile
So peaceful and lost in dreamtime
Knowing the love in your dark eyes
My eyes settle on your sweet soft lips
That offer tender whispers of love.
Leaning over you I give you a midnight kiss
Knowing how blessed I am to have you
And to have the gift of love you give me


"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home


[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-09-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-09 03:43 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, you are soooooooo romantic, sweet Tara! (smiles) This poem made me daydream of my Joanna and kissing her until the sun came up! (sigh) May this sweet kiss be a token of eternal love! (sigh) Soooooooo lovely! We all love you so much, sweet Tara! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-09 04:01 PM


Now I want one of those midnight kisses...James
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such love   it's sure looking good on you Tara   beautifully done  
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4 posted 2001-12-09 04:32 PM


*sigh* beautifully done....loved it very much!

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-12-09 04:37 PM


Noah -  Thanks for stopping in   I'm glad you liked it!  

JamesMichael - I hope you get your midnight kiss. Thank you for coming to read

SEA -   What can I say.. being in love agrees with me LOL. I'm glad you liked  

Charisma -   I'm happy your enjoyed it. Thank you.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2001-12-09 04:46 PM


*Gasp* This is gorgeous! Your darling Dave will love this.


love,
RosePetal

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7 posted 2001-12-09 04:54 PM


rosepetals #2.. LOL   Thank you Joanna   I'm glad you liked it    

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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8 posted 2001-12-09 05:41 PM




And may you always have that bless....

This is such a tender loving piece...

Thank you
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9 posted 2001-12-09 05:46 PM


awww...   Love it, Tara (((hugs)))

me

Michael Auguste~
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10 posted 2001-12-09 06:51 PM


Rosepetals25 - a midnight kiss, what a lovely thought for tonight...

BC

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11 posted 2001-12-09 06:59 PM


MyEnchanted_Melody - Thank you for stopping by  

Michael - Thank you I'm happy you liked it.

Bill - It is a nice thought isn't   Thanks for stopping in  

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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12 posted 2001-12-09 11:20 PM


TARA! YAY! You posted it! hehe I still have it saved on my puter, I read it when I miss you lol... (yeah yeah its for Dave but hey, I still love your work)  

Hehe Love you to bits! HUGS Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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13 posted 2001-12-09 11:26 PM


*sigh* stunning.....I am so very glad you have such a love as this in your life. You and Dave are truly blessed. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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14 posted 2001-12-10 12:16 PM


yes, star, we truly are.
and this sort of thing, in all it's silken clarity, reminds me why.
dear, your gifts astound me. i wish i felt that i could reply to this poem in kind, but i think any attempt to respond in verse could only steal luster from the crafting you've made here.
absolutely beautiful, my dear.
as usual  
-Dave

[This message has been edited by NapalmsConstantlyConfused (edited 12-10-2001).]

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15 posted 2001-12-10 01:44 AM


Rosepetals25,

Your words reveal with each caress
Such true feelings of tenderness.

Jo Mason
12/10/01


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16 posted 2001-12-10 01:45 AM


*sigh* This is a beautiful poem, Rose!

Nathan

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17 posted 2001-12-10 10:33 AM


Rouge24 - Awwwww..  you're a sweety Thank you for stopping in although you obiviously already read it   hehe

Karen - *hugs* Thank you. I'm glad you stopped in.

Dave - You are really too kind   I love you my dear, incase ya haven't noticed yet hehe.

JoMason - I'm glad you liked it, Thank you for stopping in.

Nate Dogg - Thank you!   I'm glad you stopped in to read.



"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-10-2001).]

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18 posted 2001-12-14 12:47 PM


and if anyone wonders why i gave this a bump they need their head examined.

-Dave

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19 posted 2001-12-14 11:19 PM


Hi rosepetal's,

This is so full of beautifully romantic feelings and thought's and of course I am so very happy you have found someone to share these thought's and feeling's with, so very enjoyable your poety thank you.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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20 posted 2001-12-14 11:46 PM


Love generates the most beautiful poetry on earth. This poem is pure romante. Well done, sweet one.
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21 posted 2001-12-15 12:04 PM


Fascinating...this midnight kiss...one of my favorites...James
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22 posted 2001-12-15 05:42 AM


cerenity - Thank you for your kind words.   I have been very lucky this year.. I never thought I'd be this happy

Midnitesun - Thank you for coming in and reading   I'm glad you enjoyed.

James - It's definately one of my favorites   Thanks for stopping in  

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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23 posted 2001-12-15 12:14 PM


What a sweet romantic poem. Very well written..thanks so much for sharing    
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