Open Poetry #17 |
Midnight Kiss |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Midnight Kiss Feeling you lay so close to my side Your warmth, soft, reaching out to me I smile softly into the surrounding night Your chest rises and falls with every breath My heart sings with happiness and joy Knowing your heart beats with love for me My eyes take in your strong loving arms That hold me close, make me feel so safe Your hands rest quietly at your still side I can almost feel them stroke my hair In the comforting way that only you could do. I look over to see your sleeping profile So peaceful and lost in dreamtime Knowing the love in your dark eyes My eyes settle on your sweet soft lips That offer tender whispers of love. Leaning over you I give you a midnight kiss Knowing how blessed I am to have you And to have the gift of love you give me "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, you are soooooooo romantic, sweet Tara! (smiles) This poem made me daydream of my Joanna and kissing her until the sun came up! (sigh) May this sweet kiss be a token of eternal love! (sigh) Soooooooo lovely! We all love you so much, sweet Tara! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now I want one of those midnight kisses...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such love it's sure looking good on you Tara beautifully done |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* beautifully done....loved it very much! Charisma |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - Thanks for stopping in I'm glad you liked it! JamesMichael - I hope you get your midnight kiss. Thank you for coming to read SEA - What can I say.. being in love agrees with me LOL. I'm glad you liked Charisma - I'm happy your enjoyed it. Thank you. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*Gasp* This is gorgeous! Your darling Dave will love this. love, RosePetal |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
rosepetals #2.. LOL Thank you Joanna I'm glad you liked it "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
And may you always have that bless.... This is such a tender loving piece... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
awww... Love it, Tara (((hugs))) me Michael Auguste~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rosepetals25 - a midnight kiss, what a lovely thought for tonight... BC |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
MyEnchanted_Melody - Thank you for stopping by Michael - Thank you I'm happy you liked it. Bill - It is a nice thought isn't Thanks for stopping in "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
TARA! YAY! You posted it! hehe I still have it saved on my puter, I read it when I miss you lol... (yeah yeah its for Dave but hey, I still love your work) Hehe Love you to bits! HUGS Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* stunning.....I am so very glad you have such a love as this in your life. You and Dave are truly blessed. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
yes, star, we truly are. and this sort of thing, in all it's silken clarity, reminds me why. dear, your gifts astound me. i wish i felt that i could reply to this poem in kind, but i think any attempt to respond in verse could only steal luster from the crafting you've made here. absolutely beautiful, my dear. as usual -Dave [This message has been edited by NapalmsConstantlyConfused (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Rosepetals25, Your words reveal with each caress Such true feelings of tenderness. Jo Mason 12/10/01 |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
*sigh* This is a beautiful poem, Rose! Nathan |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Rouge24 - Awwwww.. you're a sweety Thank you for stopping in although you obiviously already read it hehe Karen - *hugs* Thank you. I'm glad you stopped in. Dave - You are really too kind I love you my dear, incase ya haven't noticed yet hehe. JoMason - I'm glad you liked it, Thank you for stopping in. Nate Dogg - Thank you! I'm glad you stopped in to read. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
and if anyone wonders why i gave this a bump they need their head examined. -Dave |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi rosepetal's, This is so full of beautifully romantic feelings and thought's and of course I am so very happy you have found someone to share these thought's and feeling's with, so very enjoyable your poety thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Love generates the most beautiful poetry on earth. This poem is pure romante. Well done, sweet one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fascinating...this midnight kiss...one of my favorites...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
cerenity - Thank you for your kind words. I have been very lucky this year.. I never thought I'd be this happy Midnitesun - Thank you for coming in and reading I'm glad you enjoyed. James - It's definately one of my favorites Thanks for stopping in "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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mysti New Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 3 |
What a sweet romantic poem. Very well written..thanks so much for sharing |
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