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tearpearl Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 17 |
Been finding myself thinking of you, lately Every time I am alone, staring at the wall My mind wandering around and about With closed eyes, images of you float by Abed and you on the phone So much I feel the need to tell you But my feelings get in the way Of what I really feel I need to say Many times, since we met I’ve thought about us and how you Would bite my lip when we kiss It bleeds, and I fall in love I really wonder what your perception Is about all of this I don’t want you to slip through my fingers Or drift away into the unknown Don’t you see, don’t you see it? There will be no awkward kiss, telling of others lips No Dashboard Confessional broken heart, just me So kiss me hard, with your eyes closed tight |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
So kiss me hard, with your eyes closed tight This is a really great, not to mention sweet, poem. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
MAGNIFICENT!!!All you need to do is give this poem to the person you are writing about. Absolutely wonderful. Welcome to Passions...I know you will love all the poets here because not only are they talented but very loving too. **Hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Don’t you see, don’t you see it? There will be no awkward kiss, telling of others lips No Dashboard Confessional broken heart, just me So kiss me hard, with your eyes closed tight ================================= very cool poem....intense and aching... written like a diary page or a love letter. The longing comes across in every word. Welcome to Poetry Land tearpearl. its so nice to have you here with us. Its not like you to say sorry, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to our Passionate world, tearpearl... Your romantic poetry will find a comfortable home here.. Check your emsil for a special greeting..  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Tearpearl, welcome to these passionate blue boards. Your entry poem is full of passion and longing. Well done!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh Oksana, this is soooooooo gorgeous, I'm sure if you shared this with your sweetheart, it would melt his heart forever! (smiles) You are sooooo romantic, your love lights these pages with your beautiful debut! (big hugggsssss) Welcome to Passions, sweet Oksana, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Very impressive and touching first post, Oksana! We welcome you here on the blue pages. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I think you're going to like it around here... |
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