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I Dare To Believe
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I Dare To Believe |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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I Dare To Believe Gentle, sweet caress, giving tenderness Understanding eyes, heart released it flies Over distance far, wishing on a star Open are two hearts, lovers dance now starts Hope that never ends, heart felt love it sends Dream of love’s delights of passion shared nights Strong arms holding near, true love without fear Dream of love I weave, I dare to believe It is fantasy, sad is reality God will bless someday, love sent me, His way Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It is fantasy, sad is reality God will bless someday, love sent me, His way ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes Karen, and I wish these things for you as well. Good write as always! *Happy Holidays* ~Hugs, Nancy~  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
And believe you must! Enjoyed this. Like the way it flows. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And I know with all my heart that very soon you will be embraced by the most beautiful love of your dreams, and you will be happy with him forever! (sigh) Believe in your heart always, for dreams can come true, for you are the Dream Weaver, and a shining star to Him. (big hugggssssss) I wish this dream to come true for you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Keep the dream my friend! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...you are certainly inspired...your sensual and romantic words are a wonderful soothing feel to my eyes...much enjoy your poetry... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You just go right ahead and believe, sweetheart, there's nothing wrong in believing and don't forget it. You're poetry is alive and special and so are you. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
"it is fantasy sad is reality" Amazing. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep...hang on to the dream...enjoyed this much. jwesley |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
My dearest sweet Lady Karen and wonderful friend and confidant, your beauty is only exceeded by your kindness and loving spirit, just know that I thank God each and every day for your true friendship, it is and continues to be so very precious to me! Your knight and poet always and forever! Love, Sir Robert |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Nancy...*grin* well I am hoping I have been good enough this year for Santa to bring me my fantasy. I am so glad you liked it. **hugs**  Krawdad...*giggling* I don't think I have the ability to stop believing...maybe someday my dream will come true. I am glad you liked the way it flowed. **hugs** Noah...you are such a dear...I wish the very same for you and I know that your dreams will come true. **hugs** EagleOne...what would you and I do without our dreams, dear one? So very good to hear from you. **special hugs** Magnus...It is the season....I seem to be filled with joy and love....Thank you, I am so happy you liked it. **hugs** Irish Rose...I promise not to forget it...and with someone like you and your beautiful poems to keep me believing in magic I will have no worry of forgetting it. **big hugs** Zukene_Chic... thank you, I am glad you liked it. **hugs** jwesley...I will hold tight to my dreams and who knows what the future will hold. I am glad you liked it. **hugs** Sir Robert...This lady bows graciously to your warm and loving compliment. Thank you, so much, my friend. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
*catching up* - and I am sure glad this didn't slip away from me before I read it. I believe in dreams, and miracles - so of course I absolutely loved this. Hold onto your dreams and one day they will become reality. ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
These are touching couplets, very nicely expressed. *s |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You have captured the beauty of two and the hopeful dance of an open heart. Great share! Thankyou... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
What a beautiful write! And, boy, can I relate. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely writing Startime...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I hope you always dare to believe Karen. With verse like this..you are certainly going to polish someone's star! Lovely!!! Love, Peace and Joy Sincerely, Regina |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I agree Karen on dreams the only way to fly as so often reality can make one cry Hope "keep spreading those wings where your heart sings |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Karen... always dare to believe. Enjoyed. Deb |
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