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Snowbound
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Snowbound Looking out at where we once walked where we had hugged where we had talked a special place felt by my heart lost in snow falling, we part The coldness massed the snow so fell our words fell short we could tell what once was warm has grown a chill two hearts, so in love now grown ill Confusion storms still wind increased love subsided happiness ceased times drift in waves some lost, some found it finds us trapped and cold snowbound |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Looking out at where we once walked where we had hugged where we had talked a special place felt by my heart lost in snow falling, we part ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Craig, this is very well written but so sad. Why must love end? I know you don't have the answer...I'm just rambling today.....but, wanted to say how much I liked this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Darn, you've given "falling snow" a whole new meaning! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you have described it perfectly. It feels snowbound when it happens. I just prefer to make snowbound more romantic. *sigh* My heart goes out to you, Craig. **big hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Craig, being left out in the cold can really make this most painful season of the year. Your imagery is always delightful, even when the tone of the poem is sad. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Oh Craig, my heart goes out to you, my heart cries to feel the sorrow of your heart! (sigh) Sometimes love can be weathered and it's not meant to be, but there is a true love that He always prepares for each of us, and your heart is destined to sing with the joy of love forever, and bring spring to your heart! (sigh) Always listen to your heart, and you will achieve anything! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Craig...this expresses a very great depth of sadness and loneliness. I hope you have not been experiencing this...Your poetry is simply outstanding...and if you express your feelings verbally half as well as you write them...you will win... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Craig, I have to echo Magnus's thoughts.. I hope this isn't how you are feeling. This is such an emotional peice.. so powerful. But all your work is like this... so good Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love your words my friend. jwesley |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Craig, The imagery coupled with writing skill made this a powerful piece of work, and yes a very sad topic indeed to write about, hope all is well, happy holiday's. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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