You Are There… Here With Me (Lady W Challenge)

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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2001-12-14 11:10 AM

You Are There… Here With Me

I can hear your warm voice on the phone
Reaching out to me over the
Miles that keep us far apart
And closing my eyes I know that

You are there… here with me.

When my day brings me such sorrow
Making my heart heavy with tears
I see your soothing soft brown eyes
And I know your heart is with me

You are there… here with me

When you hear my giggles dancing
And I hear your laughter rolling
It lights up my soul with a soft peace
It fills my heart with such joy cause

You are there… here with me

When my heart aches to hold you close
Pull you near me in loves embrace
To whisper to you I love you
To get lost in our own heaven

You are there… here with me

I know no matter where we are
Or where our lives take us that day
My soul cries out you… bonded
And your heart holds me close because

You are there… here with me.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-14-2001).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-14 11:12 AM

BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!

Absolutely perfect. You have capture the full spirit of the challenge and brought it's feeling to life in poem. I love it!!!**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-14 11:15 AM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Tara, you have written this challenge so heavenly! (sigh) Your words are always filled with such magic and love, God Bless You! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-12-14 11:21 AM

When you hear my giggles dancing
And I hear your laughter rolling
It lights up my soul with a soft peace
It fills my heart with such joy cause

You are there… here with me

When my heart aches to hold you close
Pull you near me in loves embrace
To whisper to you I love you
To get lost in our own heaven
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well it doensnt get much better than that

this is lovely Tara...your devotion comes across the miles in every word.
this challenge has inspired wonderful things in our poets.
beautiful.
jm

Its not like you to say sorry,
I was waitin on a different story.
This time I'm mistaken ...
for handing you a heart worth breaking.

Nickleback

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-12-14 11:23 AM

RP~ girl, this is so beautiful

I just kept sighing and smiling

I love this

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

5 posted 2001-12-14 11:30 AM

I don't think I've ever been kept so busy reading so many different ways to express a sentiment of the heart...You are there, here with me

Lovely, just lovely!

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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6 posted 2001-12-14 11:37 AM

Karen - Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

Noah - *hugs* to you sweet friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it

Janet - I'm glad to see you stopped into read

I actually wasn't going to do it.. I've known about the challange and tried before.. but.. let's just say it didn't work..lol. Then in a span of about 15 min. this came tumbling out.. guess I got inspired huh? *chuckles* Thank you for your kind words.

Susan - Thanks chickie

I'm happy you liked it

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-14-2001).]

Rogue24
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since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-12-14 11:41 AM

Tara your words always like a soft embrace. I am so happy to see you full of love YAY!
lol
HUGS
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

8 posted 2001-12-15 10:16 PM

wow.
beautiful, honey.
i am in awe of your talents, both poetic, and psychic - how did you know exactly what i was thinking?
i love you too, my dear.
-Dave

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