Open Poetry #17 |
You are there, here with Me" - The Lady's challenge |
2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
"You are there, here with Me" We’ve made it over thirty years now. I know the reason. Do you know how? There’s only one answer that I can see. "You are there, here with Me". Each year I love you more, to this I cannot lie. Each year my love grows beyond the day I die. Our love started when the stars shined bright. I’ll always remember that beautiful night. We made a bet, on rain, to see who would miss. We each fell in love. We both won the kiss. With a bet like that, how could either lose. On that night you became my muse. We made our vows so all could see. Yes, You are there, here with Me. I'll always be your man and you my wife. It’s forever and a day, not just this life. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
what a romantic way to meet this challenge... I think this is lovely |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A challenge well met |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes, a challenge very well met, and you HAVE shared this with yours, yes? What? No? Do! Lady will approve! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so romantic. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I so approve! I also second the Motion that this should be tucked into your wife's Christmas stocking...what a lovely way to wish her Merry Christmas... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* true romance that stands the test of time. Wonderful!! I love it. **hugs** Perfect for the challenge. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is wonderful. Thank you for writing it. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
2dalimit, It's gotta be love. Thirty years! Wow! Romance does work... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
SEA… Thank you. It means a lot coming from you. Interloper… Thank you. I am honored by your comment. Sunshine… Thanks. I share every thing with my love. SmartChick… Thanks. We do have a romantic relationship. Lady W… Thank you. Your challenge was well worth the effort and she already knows how I feel. StarT… Thanks. Forever and a day has been what we live for. inot… Thanks. We got it. Larry C… Yes. It’s actually 31 ½ years on Christmas Day. |
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