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If Into Tomorrow ... Marge and Bill
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If Into Tomorrow ... Marge and Bill |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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If Into Tomorrow ~*Marge Tindal*~ and ~Bill Haight~ If into tomorrow I could take one memory of yesterday I'd take the look as your eyes searched my soul when I heard you softly say ... 'You are all I need or want - You make me whole' Sweet, sweet words, they are like music a symphony of inspiration to this tattered soul More and more I long for you every moment 'I've given you my heart to hold' You touch me so very caringly wrapping my heart in tenderest melt I want to be in all of your tomorrows 'No greater love have I ever known or felt' You really do light up my life You have taken my heart As long as I have you by my side 'Our hearts will never, ever part' ~Two hearts joined in One 'Big Love'~ December 13, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
ohhhh boy this ones gettin lots of replies i can just sense it!! You know, it really changes the feeling of the poem when it is collaboratively written by two people, and two people in love, nonetheless! (if im not mistaken) This is fastastica, no other poem written by a single person could surpass it |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge & Bill- OH...I think you know how much I love this! It's soooooooo good to see your love growing, and I feel privileged to be a witness to it.  This makes me sooooooo happy, I think my heart is going to burst with joy for you!  Love and hugs to you both,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge and Bill...very well written...such love...you both have penned it perfectly.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The two of you have made my heart smile tonight..thank you for sharing the joy! Hugs and love!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic writing...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
What great writing Marge and Bill. Peaches |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleScorpion~ We thank you so much - you are definitely not mistaken~ Vicky~ We BOTH just love you to pieces~ When Bill got me, he got you in the package of my heart~ My love and thanks for each prayer of love and just for being YOU ... always there ... always a friend~ Magnus~ We thank you very much~ MartieSis~ And we smile right back at you, sweetie~ Thanks ... always~ JamesMichael~ Thank you very much friend~ Peaches~ We appreciate knowing you enjoyed it~ We enjoyed sharing this love with others~ *Hugs* ~*Marge and Bill*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Romance....how absolutely stunning. Your love for each other flows together in these words that leave me sighing. MAGNIFICENT!!! I love it!!!! I love that love is flowing in your hearts for each other. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful, Marge and Bill! Your love for each other really does show. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
But how can you love a man named hate?  Oh! HAIGHT!!  That's ok, then  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When two are so content that they can finish each others thoughts and speak each others hearts then it could only be pure poetry in motion. This is a heart-smile. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This will surely be my favorite poem of the day, and I just started reading! Love makes even the coldest dreeriest days feel like a warm cozy blankie. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marge and Bill! This is wonderful! I am so happy for the two of you.... and as a bonus....you write beautifully together! What more could you ask? Hugs, Nancy."A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah some day, White Feather, you must tell me the story, for it is a wide and open path the both of you trod. I wish you both well, for it is quite apparent, happiness is a given... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Words fail me... so I'll just sit here smiling as I enjoy. *S* The two of you create beautiful poetry... *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) BRAVO!!! OH MARGE, THIS IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) May your love forever shine into tomorrow with joy! (sigh) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a splendid write Marge and Bill.....enjoyed it very....very much ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Awwww, I just love it! You guy's!!! jwesley |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
That was wonderul. I love it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Thank you so very much~ SmartChick~ I appreciate you letting us share with you~ Balladeer~ It's the easiest thing I've ever done~ JanetMarie~ Thanks hon~ MidniteSun~ Thank you for letting us be your 'blankie'. Enchantress~ I thank you .. we appreciate the reply~ Karilea~ A path of certainty we have joined our hearts upon~ Thank you sweet lady~ SuthernGal~ You know that I apprecite YOU~ *HUGS* ---- Charisma~ Thank you so much~ JWesley~ Awwww, we thank you~ ZukeneChic~ Appreciate the read and reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. Without doubt darling girl YOU are glowing, I know you two will be exceedingly happy. Congratulations both of you, I know just how wonderful love makes you feel. This is written as if you were actually wrting with each others hearts, so you must be. Fabulous writing, I'm as happy as a grig for you. If ever there was someone who deserved real love 'tis you. Bill you are a very lucky man But I know you knows that. As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge & Bill, I heard the loudest heart throb coming from my computer. I hunted and hunted and I think I found the source. Wow! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ 'This is written as if you were actually writing with each others hearts' EXACTLY ... thank you darling girl~ I love ya' Larry~ Why thank you very much~ We appreciate that~ ~*Marge & Bill*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
We are both sitting here reading our expressions of love~ Maybe we'll just have to do another one TOGETHER ! Ya' think ? *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ & Bill~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis and Bill/brother? Yes...please do another!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awww, sweet SIS ... for YOU, we'll sure work on it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge/Sis & Bill/Brother*~ ( actually Bill said, "Oh, brother!" But he said it with a  )~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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