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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sometimes you hurt me deeper than my skin and kept on even when I let you win did all I could to polish your pride I needed you by my side SOMETIMES when you have it all it isn’t nearly enough weakness bleeds through when things get tough now no words are left to say you made the choices you have your way "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, I know just what you mean, but as long as you look happy to your heart, you will always be strong and you will grow rich in love and strength. (sigh) Very powerfully expressed, sweet words, you are a treasure to us all! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
To be hurt like that can be the worst feeling in the world, you expressed this greatly, however, someone will step in and be there for you every momoent. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
I know where you are coming from, to be hurt that deeply, I hope your heart heals eventually. -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen, this is very well written, showing very deep feelings. Enjoyed, hugs, Nancy.  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and sometimes, for them, winning is not enough. . . you have spoken well here helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How simple happiness can be if we don't let our anger be in control of us...We have to say goodbye to it before we can ever truly say hello. A very emotion filled poem.. I enjoyed it for how you penned it...not for what it said...for that is sad. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad, Helen! I hope your heart heals soon. |
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