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Sven
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0 posted 2001-12-13 04:16 PM


My friends, "December's Flame" is my gift to all of you. . . may the spirit of the season be with you, in you and all of your loved ones, not only now, but the whole year through. . .

Thank you. . .

Sven

Burning within each of us,
The flame flickers through the year.
But reaches its height this last month
To spread the warmth and cheer.

The flame is high for all to see
And offers warmth and love
Greatly needed this time of year
A gift from angels up above

But when the New Year comes in,
That flame inside dies down
The warmth becomes embers
And smiles become frowns

Should we hold the flame this way
In the lanterns of our hearts?
Do we not know that once out
It's hard for it again to start?

So my wish for you and yours
Is a simple one, it's true
Keep December's Flame within your hearts
To shine the whole year through

From Open 4 and Open 11--Revised for 2001

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-13 04:21 PM



Ah, you knew I'd come in to read this again....and thank you again for it!

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2 posted 2001-12-13 04:23 PM


STANDING OVATION!!! YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssssss) GOD BLESS YOU ALL, SWEET FRIENDS, MAY WE TOGETHER EMBRACE IN A CIRCLE OF HANDS AND SHARE THE FLAME OF LOVING AND SHARING EVERYDAY!!! (smiles) IT IS CHRISTMAS IN THE HEART THAT BRINGS CHRISTMAS TO THE AIR!!! (smiles) BRAVO!!! May we all have the happiest holidays! We all love you so much, sweet John! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-13 04:34 PM


A kind and most wise wish for the season...thanks, Sven.
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4 posted 2001-12-13 04:35 PM


It seems you knew I was needing a smile today, my friend. This is beautiful. I don't believe I've read it before.    

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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5 posted 2001-12-14 05:56 AM


Such a wonderful gift will not live at the bottom of the stack for long. This needs to be read by everyone as it is everyone's gift.

You ask a lot here, Sir. I wonder how many people will accept such a challenge.  

I am many.

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6 posted 2001-12-14 11:25 AM


You know,this is a wonderful poem, with great meaning. But I find my flame nearly out over the holidays.Wonder why that is? I always breathe a great sigh of relief when New Years is passed .
Regardless of my moodiness...HAPPY CHRISTMAS TO YOU
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-12-14 11:28 AM


Sven,

   What a beautiful poem You give us your gift all year round, sharing your wonderfully talented, graceful, and stunning talent with us.  Have a good holiday Sven.  I hope it is s safe and warm holiday season for you. *hugs*  

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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8 posted 2001-12-14 11:30 AM


BRAVO!!!! Leave it to you, Sven, of the big heart to come up with such a magnificent poem as this. All you have said here is also my wish to everyone. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-12-14 11:44 AM


Sven

A very beautiful Christmas gift,by way of this poem.Nice job!

Sven
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10 posted 2001-12-14 01:51 PM


thanks to everyone that has replied. . .  

you're all wonderful people and poets. . .and I wish all of you nothing but the best. . . always. . .

thank you. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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11 posted 2001-12-14 02:36 PM


Hi Sven,

This is a gem and thank you so much for sharing it with all of us, miss you much.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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12 posted 2001-12-14 03:23 PM


Sven,

Thanks for sharing this with us.   I loved it! What a wonderful piece... hope everyone is having a wonderful season. Peace, and God bless!

Sincerely,
Titus

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13 posted 2001-12-14 05:08 PM


Sven...thank you for sharing this with me..
I was not here last year to read it...Much
enjoy this...YES...I hope we all do..

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14 posted 2001-12-14 08:28 PM




Oh....Yes......May that flame always burns for all of us.....

A lovely gift Sven.....

Best Wishes to you....

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Nan
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15 posted 2001-12-14 08:39 PM


May each Passionate flame burn brightly...
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16 posted 2001-12-14 08:45 PM


Sven, I know your flames are bright all year long, for I first showed up here in the summer, and have felt the warmth of Friendship and Love's flame in your words each month. Thank you, for the gentle reminder to keep this flame burning brightly all year long.
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17 posted 2001-12-14 09:50 PM


Yes, Sven, lets keep the candle lit year round!  Wonderful write that I was not here to see last year..thanks for the repost.  Hugs, Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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18 posted 2001-12-15 02:27 AM


Sven,

Not being here last year, this is my first time to read this.

Thank you for shining your light on us, and illuminating these words of wisdom.

Best wishes for a Merry Christmas and a very bright New Year!

JoMason
12/15/01

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19 posted 2001-12-15 02:30 AM


Thank you very much for this uplifting piece.  A great message -- may we all take the love and light of the Season and keep it shining the whole New Year through!  

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

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20 posted 2001-12-15 02:35 AM


lovely my dearPoetFriend I truly enjoyed this precious read...
HugsNsmiles2uFriendSven
*~coco~*

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21 posted 2001-12-15 11:28 AM


enjoyed merry christmas
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22 posted 2001-12-15 11:35 AM


~So my wish for you and yours
Is a simple one, it's true
Keep December's Flame within your hearts
To shine the whole year through~

Thank you dear friend for these wonderful thoughts, it shows your Beautiful heart Sven.
May your flame light and shine upon many the whole year through  

(((hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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23 posted 2001-12-15 01:55 PM


Sven - thank you for writing this as a gift to not only me, but to all.

This my friend is my gift to you. 'May your days be filled without sadness, but joy in this most special of holidays. It would be my pleasure to shake your hand someday. The best to you, my friend who walks by my side in this universe...'

BC

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24 posted 2001-12-16 01:16 PM


Eternally grateful, for your eternal warmth this season and always! So true...the spirit should always stay so aglow!

Love, Peace and Joy!

Always,
Regina

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25 posted 2001-12-16 11:41 PM


thank you all so much my friends. . . you are what makes this place so special. . . and I'm glad that I can come and share with you. . .

for me, that's the greatest gift of all. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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26 posted 2001-12-17 10:33 AM


Thank you Sven...a beautiful gift from you..as always...and i hope
your flame of joy brings eternal happiness....

                                 ~Victoria~

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27 posted 2001-12-17 10:36 AM


Ooooooooooooooops.  
Reply number 5286.  
I almost missed this.  
Sorry.

Many thanks to the GR8 Voice of the Northlands and may God bless you and yours  

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28 posted 2001-12-17 11:02 AM


The best wish for the season and year round.
Peaches

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29 posted 2001-12-18 01:25 AM


Should we hold the flame this way
In the lanterns of our hearts?
Do we not know that once out
It's hard for it again to start?

an interesting question..thank you for pointing this out...Sven, i promise to quit my whiny, *****y ways..

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30 posted 2001-12-18 10:28 PM


May the flame always burn eternal, Sven.  Wonderful write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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