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New Tide |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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New Tide I was on a roller coaster and didn’t like the ride the things that hurt me went deeper than my pride no one was listening to the screams of my plea a life of your own left me alone with me needed to depend on you but no one was there just empty house four walls to stare you lived under the cover of love unconditional but your love for me was so transitional so I drowned you in a sea of forgiveness never once did you apologize taking advantage of all I missed but…new winds have blown across the sea there is a new tide and it has changed me "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhh, this is powerful!! I love it!  really this is fantastic!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - but…new winds have blown across the sea there is a new tide and it has changed me This is a most beautiful writing, touched me it did. Especially the above verse. I also have seen the new tide, and it has also changed me... Thank you for this... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Helen, this is sooooooo beautiful, your compassionate heart echoes and speaks softly like the breeze! (sigh) We all go through new tides, and out of them we becoming more loving and understanding! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Changes, I have made a lot of those in the past ten months, and what a rush! The funny thing is with change comes understanding of yourself, you see a new side of yourself, something I encourage for people to do, even if sadness isnt a factor in life, ever changing of who we are can be very rewarding. lol sorry, not only am I in a nutty mood, I find myself talking with my heart today. Very beautiful write! Deeply felt (if you cant tell) hehe  HUGS Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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