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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-13 08:55 AM



Touch


what is it I give
that you can take with you
to hold in your heart
and carry you through
do you know
that I am always there
and that I don’t just love you
but I also care
in the coldness of your day
do you still feel me warm
do I hold that power
can I transform
yes, it is true my wants are few
my needs are much
just cant hide it
I need human touch



"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 12-13-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-13 08:58 AM


yes, you said it perfectly   I love this  
Krawdad
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2 posted 2001-12-13 01:55 PM


h,
If only a "touch screen" would really work!  (reach . . .)
Very well put, lady, very well put.
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3 posted 2001-12-13 01:58 PM


Slick,
Well done enjoyed the read.

Rogue24
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4 posted 2001-12-13 02:01 PM


A touch
an embrace
anything like it?
very few
It soothes
It comforts
Wanna touch me?
I know you do  

hehe I couldnt resist
Very pretty write! I apologize for my mood, I am feelin a lil rowdy today hehe  
Hugs
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-13 02:11 PM


*sigh* we all need human touch....there is something about being held close that fills us with warmth and comfort. Wonderful writing. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-12-13 03:12 PM




(sigh) Oh Helen, I know just what you mean by desiring so little but ye tto feel touched and loved is so much. (sigh) The most simplest things can sometimes be the most rarest things to find, but in all our hearts, the magic and beauty of love is there and as we all share love to the world, we will all be touched and felt in return! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful! (kiss on cheek) You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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