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Open Poetry #17

Ready me for Tomorrow

Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

0 posted 2001-12-13 07:41 AM

In white so like a sweet angel divine,
Long hair pulled back as she washes for sleep,
It’s times like these I want to make you mine,
Only for me to love always to keep.

I wish to hold you tight for ever more,
To make you safe from a world that’s gone mad,
Be safe as you travel I do implore,
It’s these soft times with me that make me glad.

I can hold you tightly so tightly now,
Kissing you soft as passion does soft grow,
I wish to make this time always somehow,
But you have packed your bag and you will go.

The loving touch of you thrills my being,
For all the times to come you are freeing.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-12-13 07:48 AM

A love that is free is the truest love of all, dear Son Netier...

Your sonnets are a pleasure to read - Keep them coming...

Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

2 posted 2001-12-13 07:52 AM

Nan,
Your kind words of encouragement, and the general warmth of you and the other poets here stimulate the writer.

Bill

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-12-13 08:05 AM

In white so like a sweet angel divine,
Long hair pulled back as she washes for sleep,
It’s times like these I want to make you mine,
Only for me to love always to keep.

Beautiful imagery. I love the flow! Cheers!
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-12-13 08:09 AM

Son Netier,
Happy Holiday, enjoyed the read.

Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

5 posted 2001-12-13 08:19 AM

Rogue24,
Sometime writing the imagery come from having such a nice image, it’s those times the flow is easy to let out.

Seymour,
Seasons best to you also.

Bill

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