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When Sunshine Pierced Where I Was Lost
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When Sunshine Pierced Where I Was Lost |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
No words just pages wrapped around my soul now looking at those lines in a different way. How would whispers sound if my fingertips could speak? Would they sound like imploring love fondling keys stroke after stroke of adoration? Tonight the barriers were there haunting us a presence all too unwelcomed in the haven we usually rest in when the dreams seem to die and our eyes flood our cheeks in waterfalling tears. Ahh, my Darling, how I miss the imprint of your soul on my own when obligation takes hold of my night. And I write through tears a love story that unfolds piece by delicate piece. Your sweet taste endures in the warm foiled wrapping of my need and I want us to age into one package of near perfection. Love has a flawless appetite for two helpings of willingness and my will has been seized. Has yours, my Love? What oceans have you crossed in dreams of me and how long will it take me to reach out my hand one last time and fall into your arms? My hand in yours is the secret key that opens the door to forever. My love bears yours your love bears mine and when will we stand and where will we stand and how long would it be then, before we begain to walk and journey? Oh, to love I am bound! Oh, to love I am lost! I breathe for you. Find me here resting on you the rock in the clearing as I am lost in unfamiliar wood and will not step forward once more without your hand. I am many. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Said with real feeling here. Very good. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, your Title drew me in, and I'm glad it did....thank you for this! |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
I Liked this Reads nice and easy sentimentally sensuous Joe Lamando |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Great poem, full of sentimental longing. I enjoyed this. Until recently I never understood how one soul can need another so deeply, and your poem touched this part of me. Thanks  Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
I had to read this numerous times because I couldn't digest it all at once because t was so rich in wonderful language and ideas of passion and love. Thanks! -R. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Your heart reaches out with a beseeching call to your love hoping and wanting the answer to be the key that unlocks your door. Wonderful writing...Amazing. I felt it strongly. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
How would whispers sound if my fingertips could speak? Very emotional, this. Well done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . such feeling and passion. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Such beautiful yearning fills your gorgeous words, sweet friend! (sigh) I believe we all must cross oceans of passion at first to seek a lovers hand, but once you do, you will feel loves eternal happiness forever! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I wish you these beautiful dreams! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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