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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-12-13 01:18 AM



Formed from heart
Tracing each moment
Led by fingers
Onto paper or computers
Flowing along telling a story
Seeking comfort, needing a melody
Friends about, at times ignorant
Searching for an answer always important
From alphabet, to thesaurus
Baffling everyone of us
Words so kind, sometimes unkind
Foolish at times, do we mind
Poets we are, words we gather
Telling it as meant to be without fear
Words we are, words we love
Words make us, words we give

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
mirror man
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1 posted 2001-12-13 01:26 AM


I agree.  Being a poet works both ways.  Very good.
CocoBaci
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2 posted 2001-12-13 02:49 AM


Oh Daniel, it's a real treat4me2come across this gem u post here2nite...
I read your poem aloud at first N then came back2re-read it quietly and I gotta tell ya it really touches the heart of a reader (at least4me it did)...
I shall keep this jewel in my library4many more reads PoetFriend...
Thanx4a splendid read
*~coco~*

D.Lester Young
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3 posted 2001-12-13 05:00 AM


I liked this it made a lot of sense. Blessings.
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4 posted 2001-12-13 07:12 AM


Words are so important. You did this well.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-12-15 05:01 PM


Beautifully said Daniel  

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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6 posted 2001-12-15 05:33 PM




BRAVO!!! Yes, the beauty of words shine in all our hearts, and words are love, words are life, words are passion! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) We always love your words, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-12-15 05:45 PM


enjoy
Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-12-15 09:23 PM


Oh, yes, Daniel, and our words are powerful tools.  Let us never forget how powerful they are.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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9 posted 2001-12-15 09:30 PM


How true!  We poets all love words!  
Well said.  Hugs, Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Daniel J D
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10 posted 2001-12-16 06:55 PM


Mirrorman, DLester, Irish Rose, Enchantress, Mistletoe Angel, Charisma, Cocobaci, Catalinamoon, and Vandana, I thank you all for your wonderful replies, it is words that binds us together.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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