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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-12 07:56 PM

Twisted turns in empty places
The edge of calm has many paces
There is anger, and pain
But time helps to restrain

Emotions sending lyrics of angels
Into a heart crying for help's bells
There are doubts that travel endlessly
However forgotten, the edge of calm is tranquility

Another heart across oceans
Calling for a love that deepens
Sending messages from the edge of calm
Shivering in the terror of night's realm

Gathering clouds of tears
Sheltering from the walls of fears
Deep within the gloom of solitude
Each day begging for love away from harm
Awaiting to reach the edge of calm

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-12-12 07:58 PM

How disturbing and also exciting love across
oceans can be for two. Nicely written.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-12-12 08:03 PM

oceans are nothing when souls connect.
I enjoyed the calm feeling in this.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-12-12 08:09 PM

This is exquisite! What beautiful poetry:

"Each day begging for love away from harm
Awaiting to reach the edge of calm"

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-12-12 08:10 PM

Very well done!

Twisted turns in empty places
The edge of calm has many paces
There is anger, and pain
But time helps to restrain

The flow is very nice,
"Twisted turns in empty places"
very provoking, many thots run through my head as I read this line. Cheers!
Ter

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-07-19 02:02 AM

I had this in my library, but hadn't replied! It's so beautiful

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