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Morning Beams..........
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Morning Beams.......... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Morning beams penetrate the window Softly caressing my skin I’m lost in thoughts of you My only sin The chill is slowly fading As sun dries morning dew Still I find my heart Wrapped up in thoughts of you First cup of coffee gets me motivated And I begin this bright new day In my mind I still hear echoes Of the beautiful things you say Chores are but routine tasks I accomplish to pass this time Till once again I find its night when I can set my soul to rhyme In each line I write, each turn of phrase to paper my heart I pen waiting for that special time I can be with you again ~SEA~ * special thank you to Moon Dust for the inspiration |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is lovely SEA. Your night time rhyme is excellent.  I love to write at night as well. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This flows so smoothly, like soft cream cheese on a warm bagel. Hmm, maybe I am hungry for a snack? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully romantic write....I am a guy... I don't swoon....but I surely did enjoy this...I have been there... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, you are soooooooo romantic, this beautiful poem shines with your love and beauty of words. (smiles) Your words always sigh and smile across these pages! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Very Lovely Inspire, indeed... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautiful work, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan....Beautiful...just beautiful. Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, If I open the cage door, Would you sing me more? LOvely *L* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Sooo pretty! And perfect flow. I don't know how you do it chickie.. but don't stop  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Gal ... this is softly wonderful ! ! I needed it today~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Oh gosh it is a morning filled with romance and I love it. I know this feeling well. Absolutely wonderful writing that had me sighing. I love it. **hugs**  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, SEA... so very romantic! *S* |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is just so lovingly written, Susan. I've really become a BIG fan of yours. Does it show? LOL (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You are such a romantic, this is lovely. That's what love should do....develop during the day until.....whoah! There's a poem in there somewhere! Kathleen (Kay) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
sneaking up behing the lil SEA girl......BOO! This was a very sweet poem, Susan. I can see you writing, the lights on, you sitting there with one foot over the other, keeping your feet warm. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how lovely Sea, so tenderly penned Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sinfully wonderful Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
I wish I could be that happy in the morning Beautiful post!-R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
Beautiful write Susan. What else can one expect from a beautiful such as yours. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
goodness thank you all SO much!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe Ohhhhhhh MY!! Darling girl this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you Fabulous writing darling girl utterly fabulous    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Musy dear, you can't be jealous, cause you write BETTER than me LOL thank you sweet lady (((HUGS))) you are wonderful |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you write with such grace in your words. What more can I say, except your writings are suburb... BC |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well now BC, there you go making me  thank you very much |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
In each line I write, each turn of phrase to paper my heart I pen waiting for that special time I can be with you again -------------------------- Sea, I love this, and can relate very well. Glad you were inspired so well. A keeper for sure.Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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